【正文】 語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。9．為了吸引外國游客，杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對杭州茶文化進行宣傳。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語為其寫一篇介紹，詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補充內(nèi)容。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。亮點詞匯短語：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。亮點句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對某人來說）做某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉，它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān)，而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語從句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。10．請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點：考查提綱類作文