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ascinated me and made me long to supervise a large project in this field one day. Although I realize my current limitations, my wholehearted enthusiasm, bined with guidance from your exceptional faculty, will carry me through the rigors of studying and forge me into an expert control systems engineer after the two year . coursework and the subsequent . courses. 點(diǎn)評(píng):本段寫通過作者不斷學(xué)習(xí),確立了自己今后的學(xué)習(xí)方向和目標(biāo),并且把自己的興趣很好的與申請(qǐng)學(xué)校相結(jié)合,同時(shí)反映了自己本學(xué)校在這方面的劣勢。反映出自己迫切想要到對(duì)方學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)的渴望。 Upon graduation from your school, I plan to work as a practical engineer in a large manufacturing pany or as a researcher at an institute. Participating in the development of advanced airplanes, space shuttles, and satellites would fulfill my aspirations. In the long term, I would like to bee a professor in order to share my knowledge and experience and instruct the next generation of aeronautical engineers. 點(diǎn)評(píng):最后一段作者描寫了自己從這個(gè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)后,可以取得的成績和職業(yè)規(guī)劃。使學(xué)??梢钥闯鰧W(xué)校的教育可以給他提供的幫助。同時(shí)反映出了作者明確的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo),和動(dòng)機(jī)。 8