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s a participant in a model plane tournament in elementary school, I found the joy of making a model plane and tinkering with it to find the perfect form. This boyhood pastime fostered my decision to major in aeronautical and mechanical engineering in one of the best engineering schools in Korea, Hankuk Aviation University. 點(diǎn)評(píng):第一段通過(guò)描述作者小時(shí)候制作飛機(jī)模型和參加比賽的經(jīng)歷,體現(xiàn)了他小時(shí)候的夢(mèng)想,和興趣的產(chǎn)生。并引用懷特兄弟說(shuō)明了自己決心的堅(jiān)定。從而引出了自己今后的目標(biāo),和追求目標(biāo)考上航空機(jī)械工程學(xué)院的經(jīng)歷。這個(gè)開(kāi)篇雖然比較大眾,但是表達(dá)出了自己的興趣和目標(biāo),并起到了引出下文的作用。 There I embraced numerous opportunities, encountering real aircraft and delving into introductory flight theory. From basic mechanics of aircraft to simple airplane design, the more I learned about my major, the more I wanted to learn. A natural extension of this burning curiosity remains to enter your renowned graduate program in the Department of Aerospace Engineering. 點(diǎn)評(píng):第二段是一個(gè)過(guò)渡段,簡(jiǎn)單介紹了在航空學(xué)院可以接觸到的東西,這些專業(yè)的知識(shí)使自己的興趣更加濃烈,促使自己更加全身心投入到這個(gè)領(lǐng)域的學(xué)習(xí)。很好的起到承上啟下的作用。 My preparation for your prog