【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I39。m so glad to know that you39。ll e to our city to learn asked me to find a place for I39。ve found one which I think is pretty place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus 39。s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is the way, the rent is 500 yuan per hope you39。ll like not, I39。ll try to find another place for , Li Hua 滿分理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開(kāi)頭的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。作文：...Dear Bob, I39。m glad to hear from to our city in 39。ve found a suitable house for house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese you take the bus, it is just one is a flat on the third floor of a has three rooms, a livingroom, a bathroom and a can cook mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for the livingroom, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with desk is next to the will be good for total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me 39。ll try my best to help , Li Hua 滿分理由本文內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，描述具體細(xì)膩，用詞適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，如“suitable house”、not far from39。39。等，另外文中的選擇疑問(wèn)句也很有新意。...第四篇：高考英語(yǔ)作文滿分技巧看圖作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)(3)看圖作文看圖作文也叫做圖畫(huà)式作文，是一種常見(jiàn)的高考題型。它是指根據(jù)圖畫(huà)所提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過(guò)幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫(huà)說(shuō)明某個(gè)問(wèn)題或得出某個(gè)結(jié)論。一般性圖畫(huà)式作文都包含六個(gè)要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、過(guò)程、結(jié)果。這些要點(diǎn)往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。看圖作文要求考生將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。一、看圖作文的考查特點(diǎn) 1．命制思路特點(diǎn)看圖作文的主要考查特點(diǎn)是生動(dòng)、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時(shí)做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫(huà)所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現(xiàn)圖畫(huà)中所反映的主要內(nèi)容。2．能力表現(xiàn)特點(diǎn)看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來(lái)的良好的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。3．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)特點(diǎn)表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過(guò)渡自然?？磮D作文行文時(shí)要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。表達(dá)過(guò)程中要注意圖畫(huà)信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進(jìn)展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序。二、看圖作文的寫(xiě)作步驟 1．仔細(xì)審題，確定要點(diǎn) 2．緊扣要點(diǎn)，組句成篇 3．表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過(guò)渡自然 4．規(guī)范書(shū)寫(xiě)，檢查潤(rùn)色美國(guó)中學(xué)生Jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫(xiě)一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來(lái)中國(guó)后的生活安排。注意：； 2．詞數(shù)不少于60。Dear Jeff，My name is Li ’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle ’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Best ，Li Hua 案例分析⊙1．認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)通過(guò)閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說(shuō)明文，須用together by bike④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文根據(jù)文章體裁的不同適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^(guò)渡性詞匯或過(guò)渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、連貫、流暢。(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ballgames or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make yo