【正文】 le ’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Best ，Li Hua 案例分析⊙1．認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài)通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用together by bike④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文根據(jù)文章體裁的不同適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、連貫、流暢。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國(guó)后的生活安排。為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進(jìn)展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序?？磮D作文行文時(shí)要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。2．能力表現(xiàn)特點(diǎn)看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來的良好的書面表達(dá)能力。一、看圖作文的考查特點(diǎn) 1．命制思路特點(diǎn)看圖作文的主要考查特點(diǎn)是生動(dòng)、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。這些要點(diǎn)往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。它是指根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫說明某個(gè)問題或得出某個(gè)結(jié)論。等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。ll try my best to help , Li Hua 滿分理由本文內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，描述具體細(xì)膩，用詞適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，如“suitable house”、not far from39。m glad to hear from to our city in 39。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。ll try to find another place for , Li Hua 滿分理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is the way, the rent is 500 yuan per hope you39。ll e to our city to learn asked me to find a place for I39。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I39。re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a...kitchen, and a is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per from this house you can get to your school take the bus at the busstop in front of the is only one last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I39。引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。作者在寫作過程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以39。m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese have already found a fiat for is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 squaremetres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I39。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：2．參考詞匯：房租€€Tent(n.).I39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提 假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。你的信必須滿足以下要求：。具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)?？淳唧w內(nèi)容而定，如果內(nèi)容多應(yīng)多用復(fù)雜句式，如果內(nèi)容不多，為了達(dá)到詞的限數(shù)應(yīng)多用簡(jiǎn)單句式，并適當(dāng)增補(bǔ)合理內(nèi)容。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語(yǔ)，漢化表達(dá)。，需變通。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。，需意譯。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并可用序號(hào)標(biāo)出以免遺忘。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________