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些大學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲,家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)校對(duì)此憂心忡忡2)但有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲并不是一無(wú)是處3)你對(duì)此的看法是……【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指 出對(duì)于某問(wèn)題的一種反面看法,提綱第2點(diǎn)指出對(duì)于該問(wèn)題的正面看法,提綱第3點(diǎn)要 求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該問(wèn)題的看法,由此可判斷本文 應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容:指出大學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的問(wèn)題,闡述家長(zhǎng)和老師對(duì)該問(wèn)題的否 定態(tài)度和他們的擔(dān)憂;指出一些人對(duì)待網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的肯定態(tài)度,并闡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的好處;表明“我”對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的看法。Online GamesAs a product of modern puter and the Internet, online games have bee very popular among college students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these as we see, some students lacking selfdiscipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and , some others argue that online games are not always can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things , they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in puter importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at if you have enough selfcontrol over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.第四篇:英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)Certificate Craze On CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2] quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this , [5] it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, , diploma and certificates are still important standards [6] by which many employers measure a person’s order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8] when it es to certificates, [9] since certificates [2] do not necessarily prove one’s crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10] nothing but wasting conclude, we should focus on improving our ability[10] but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為“隨意地,隨機(jī)地”。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng),使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),增強(qiáng)了說(shuō)服力。[3]that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句,修飾the idea。[4]設(shè)問(wèn)句引出原因,容易引起注意。[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)。[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,充當(dāng)介詞賓語(yǔ)。[7]用于引出“我”的觀點(diǎn)。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句,表示既定的原因,常譯為“既然”。[10]“只是,僅僅”?!岸皇恰薄#篩ou may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some :Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s :From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to certificates.第五篇:四六級(jí)英語(yǔ)明天一早就是四六級(jí)考試了,KK 和你們心情是一樣的,很希望大家都考好。并且如果大家都按照 KK 給你們的“模 + 板”的復(fù)習(xí)模式,一定能在考場(chǎng)上寫(xiě)出一篇非常好的文章。對(duì)于精確的作文的預(yù)測(cè),KK 也很有把握,因?yàn)樗牧?jí)作文的類型是固定的:現(xiàn)象解釋型問(wèn)題解決型對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型結(jié)構(gòu)的搭建(見(jiàn)我最牛講義)寫(xiě)作角度也是固定的:生活時(shí)間角度知識(shí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)角度環(huán)境健康角度合作角度科技發(fā)展環(huán)境角度話題也是相對(duì)比較固定的:宏觀角度問(wèn)題解決型:由食品安全引發(fā)的負(fù)面話題:The past decade of the new century has witnessed a huge development of our also brings some issue of food safety has bee a mon concern of the are a couple of factors booming this , as dietary habits change to include more meals prepared away from home, the risks of foodborne illness are example , chicken , eggs, beef and pork may have some , some food producers may even use various chemicals just to make food look or taste instance , the most notorious case involved low quality milk powder, which caused the death of a dozen as they are , such candle keep should we do ?后面加上在講義中多次講到的解決問(wèn)題的方法就可以了。偶像崇拜和選秀的問(wèn)題;Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and