【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 題，逗號一路貫穿）3. Last month, I was ill, had to live I hospital, my mother worried my class was delaied, because there was an exam in resently. 4. Now I had grown up, a senior student, after 3 years I will leave university for munication and society, I hope I will bee a teacher like my teacher, take my love to every student, live on their spirit.窗體底端窗體頂端案例 3（漢化中式諺語或名言，令人啼笑皆非）5. “one day as teacher, my parents all life.” 6. candles are burnt out while your tears are dried.7. The teacher likes the cow, eat grass, squeeze the milk.8. Teachers like the people who watered the flowers in the park. They teach us, need no back.窗體底端窗體頂端案例 4 （思想膚淺，表達混亂）9. No teacher, no today39。s me.10 .You said me, you are not a easy to die person. like wax.12. The teacher like my mother.13. You are day to night to work for us with many much study.窗體底端案例 5 （用詞不當，貽笑大方）14. If you have questions, you can e to the restroom to ask me. My English teacher often take me to restroom to talk.休息室居然寫成了洗手間！15. He touch my body softly. I want your body health. I want you. …touched me day and night.Touch詞義的混淆，造成令人捧腹的笑話！Want 錯誤的表達成“祝愿”窗體頂端16. Let39。s marry our teachers. All teachers marry together.是marry or merry, 讓人費解！17. The teacher studied him carefully in the classroom and took the afternoon to study him instead of eating anything.Study 一詞不知何意？ 窗體底端窗體頂端案例 6 詞匯詞性混淆，造成結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤17. I instead of all of classes to congratulation to you happy Teacher39。s Day.窗體底端窗體頂端 這里引述的例句與考生通篇作文的寫作水平是一致的，其中6分的例句具有典型性，代表了近乎中等水平考生的寫作水平。從這些例句中不難看出，中等水平的考生，事實上也包括中上等水平的考生，在寫作上存在的主要問題是表達思想不清楚?！　”磉_思想不清楚的主要原因是考生作文中嚴重漢化的英語，即中式英語，比如： man can live happiness， Man is iron, and food is steel., ＂Women are half side sky.＂。此外，語言錯誤的普遍性和嚴重性十分驚人，比如，主謂不一致，名詞單復數(shù)不分，動詞時態(tài)語態(tài)濫用，常用詞拼寫錯誤比比皆是。這些嚴重地影響了思想的表達?？荚噷嵺`表明，多數(shù)考生在寫作上的主要欠缺不是系統(tǒng)的寫作理論和方法，而是最基本的單句寫作能力。 　　文章無論長短，都是由句子組成的，句子是表達思想的最基本的單位。因此，句子是否能寫得正確、達意和清楚，將直接影響整篇文章的寫作質(zhì)量。窗體底端窗體頂端四、六級作文突破：下筆有神作文法（詞匯——句型——段落——篇章四位一體）一、詞匯進階 作文對于詞匯的要求詞匯量詞匯選擇詞匯禁忌Use Form Meaning 窗體底端窗體頂端 詞匯之打通關(guān)節(jié)法Transitional words and phrases 詞匯之應(yīng)試包裝法?詞性的正確使用— 生僻不如熟悉?詞義的確定把握— 大詞不如小詞?一般詞匯和具體詞匯。窗體底端?Sample:? Blink/gaze/discern/glance/glimpse/inspect/note/notice/observe/peer/stare/survey/watch2. thinkConclude/consider/contemplate/deduce/gather/guess/infer/judge/reason/reflect/speculate/suppose窗體頂端二、句子寫作進階，從句不如分詞——少犯語法錯誤，行文流暢。?.Yesterday we worked very late and we did’t stop until the clock struck midnight in order that we could fulfill our task on time.Yesterday we stayed up late, working hard in order to fulfill the task on time.窗體底端2. 句子句式多樣化，注意時態(tài)語態(tài)常用議論文句式：窗體頂端三、段落進階：三句式段落展開技法?一個段落由三類句子組成：1．主題句（topic sentence）。一般位于段首，提出段落主題、確定段落發(fā)展方向及展開模式。2．擴展句（supporting/developing sentences）。用以闡述、論證、支持、說明主題句的要點。3．終結(jié)句（paragraph terminator 或concluding sentence）。提出結(jié)論、深化主題并與主題句呼應(yīng)。442352窗體底端窗體頂端Sample paragraph ?It is not difficult to make a right choice between buying a house in the lowrise area and buying one in the highrise area(主題句). If we want to economize a