【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 n make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some ‘closed’ days for museums for regular in this way can freeadmission to museums bee a longlasting phenomenon and have sustainable : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a Green should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:??，我們應(yīng)該??Creating a Green Campus Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their ’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to make “green campus” e true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable , it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the coeffort of the whole 近來，隨著建設(shè)并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。這無疑會給我們的校園和社會帶來長遠(yuǎn)的利益?！熬G色校園”不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境，還包括人們頭腦中的環(huán)境意識。學(xué)校在培養(yǎng)年輕一代上起著關(guān)鍵作用，“綠色校園”的意識必定會對學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識產(chǎn)生長遠(yuǎn)影響。更為重要的是，年輕一代面臨著嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境污染，有太多問題等待他們?nèi)ソ鉀Q。為使“綠色校園”成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，首先應(yīng)該制定出可持續(xù)發(fā)展、可長遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展的有效政策。其次，還需要人們對環(huán)境污染的嚴(yán)肅性有正確認(rèn)識并采取實(shí)際行動切實(shí)減少污染。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強(qiáng)學(xué)校和社會的聯(lián)系以便在全社會共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實(shí)施。范文點(diǎn)評范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。第一段開門見山，強(qiáng)調(diào)當(dāng)今環(huán)保理念下構(gòu)建“綠色校園”的長遠(yuǎn)意義。第二段，著重討論“綠色校園”的含義，指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化，還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環(huán)保意識，把校園這個(gè)小環(huán)境和社會這個(gè)大環(huán)境結(jié)合起來，說理更加深刻。第三段是談及具體的做法，分一、二、三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述，無疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實(shí)處。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾呼應(yīng)，用詞準(zhǔn)確。關(guān)系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊，思想表達(dá)成熟有深度?！旧鷦拥挠迷~】 maintain保持。concept概念。profound長遠(yuǎn)的。sustainable可持續(xù)的。recyclable可循環(huán)的?！矩S富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益。play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關(guān)鍵作用。under the burden of在??重負(fù)下。e true實(shí)現(xiàn)。call for要求?！径嘧兊木涫健糠段闹虚L句、短句、簡單句、復(fù)雜句交叉使用。不同句型之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握運(yùn)用，從而獲得高分。避錯(cuò)指導(dǎo)本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉校園類話題，但與社會背景有很大關(guān)系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。另外開篇時(shí)，切忌拖泥帶水，應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。除正確審題之外，考生還應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，不落俗套。不同句型之間轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)，考生應(yīng)對句子結(jié)構(gòu)全面掌握，避免句式錯(cuò)誤造成扣分。最后，應(yīng)盡量避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯(cuò)誤如下表：正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯(cuò)誤的拼寫focus focuseeffect effection /affectenvironment envirment/invironmentburden burdonsolve sloveserious seroustrue turesociety soceitytheory thery總之，考生在構(gòu)思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯。畢竟，無錯(cuò)表達(dá)才是四級語言表達(dá)合格的核心。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:，我認(rèn)為?Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling_______________________________________________________________________________ 作文范文：Due Attention Should Be Given To SpellingCorrect spelling is a basic skill in English , nowadays many students do not pay much attention to have their own reasons for of all, they like an easy way of studying, which causes some omissions and changes in , the teachers might not be very strict in students’ China, teachers seem to be more concerned with grammar and vocabulary but not change this situation, in my opinion, the teachers and the students should work one and, the teachers should give more attention to students’ spelling, asking the students to be conscious of the importance of correct spelling from the very beginning of their English the other hand, the students themselves are supposed to be aware that correct spelling is a must in English sum up, correct spelling is so important that both students and the teachers should spare no efforts to achieve correct spelling.第五篇：歷年英語四級作文真題及答案2010年06月大學(xué)英語四級作文真題Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given , 父母應(yīng)該……How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?參考范文Help Children to Be IndependentThanks to the “family plan”policy,today in China many families have one and caring for children is an old Chinese tradition that has remained for thousands of the children are spoilt so much that they have less rely on their parents in is bad for a child39。s ,parents should develop the children39。s independence instead of doing everything for are some ways to help children to be of all,you should believe your children can do the things ,give them more chances to practise,when they don39。t know how to do it,just tell them the ,don39。t be afraid to see them the beginning,they may do something don39。t worry,just let them try can do the work as well as you if given more be independent is good for the child who is independent will succeed easily in the Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在