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,不可悲觀失望,這個(gè)總結(jié)非常能代表你對(duì)題目的總體態(tài)度,對(duì) 閱卷老師也有一定的影響。切記:悲觀的總結(jié)態(tài)度不可取。下面以今年的作文題目(學(xué)生侮辱老師,你是怎么看待的)為例,大家看我是怎么來構(gòu)造的:(記的不是很清楚了,大體這樣吧)開卷之初,老師不讓看內(nèi)容,沒關(guān)系,我就看一眼,把作文題目搞清楚了。心里在盤算著怎么來擴(kuò)展第一段,怎么來構(gòu)造第二段的三個(gè)觀點(diǎn),再怎么來總結(jié))。開卷后,我也想好了怎么作文大綱,就在草紙上寫下了提綱:1,擴(kuò)展題目(心里這么想的:隨著中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的飛速發(fā)展,財(cái)富的增加,社會(huì)也開始變化了,學(xué)生在學(xué)校里不尊重老師,辱罵老師的情況開始增多,甚至在“天之驕 子”的大學(xué),這種情況也不少見。而在三十年前,這是不可想象的。不幸的是這種情況現(xiàn)在已露泛濫趨勢(shì),對(duì)我們國(guó)家的未來很有危害,因而成為廣大社會(huì)個(gè)階層關(guān) 注的焦點(diǎn),分析這個(gè)現(xiàn)象,并找到其中根源就顯得非常必要了。2,在我看來,之所以出現(xiàn)這種情況有如下原因a, 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展,人們生活富裕,即使沒有好的教育背景,也可以過個(gè)好生活,所以對(duì)學(xué)歷不大看重,對(duì)有些學(xué)生來說,不尊重老師似乎對(duì)未來沒多大影響(之后可以舉例,或者進(jìn)一步論述…)b, 現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校,尤其是中學(xué)和大學(xué),越來越忽視對(duì)學(xué)生道德品質(zhì)的教育,采取的措施不夠,不能在發(fā)現(xiàn)苗頭后就立刻制止,結(jié)果造成現(xiàn)在情況…..c, 我們的老師,是不是也要為此負(fù)上一定責(zé)任呢?(是的,學(xué)生還小,有的不大懂事,但作為老師,要時(shí)刻注意個(gè)人形象,當(dāng)學(xué)生為自己的朋友,尊重學(xué)生,引導(dǎo)學(xué) 生。經(jīng)濟(jì)飛速發(fā)展也讓神圣的校園受到?jīng)_擊,掌握一定知識(shí)的不少老師開始了社會(huì)兼職,只把少部分精力投入到教學(xué)中,引起學(xué)生不滿…)3,這種對(duì)社會(huì)具有很大負(fù)面影響的現(xiàn)象,我認(rèn)為是暫時(shí)的(隨著社會(huì)認(rèn)識(shí)的深入,學(xué)校反省的力度加大…),因此我非常有理由相信不久的將來(這類不文明的情 況會(huì)越來越少,并最終在學(xué)校,學(xué)生,老師,社會(huì)等各個(gè)方面的努力下得到完滿解決,我滿懷信心的期待這這一天能早日到來。)括號(hào)中的內(nèi)容存在于大腦之中,有了這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的提綱做提示,再加上自己平時(shí)練就的句型,就能一氣呵成,順利的寫到250字左右。恩,這里又提到了平時(shí)練就的 句型,不錯(cuò),這就是平時(shí)積累的結(jié)果,我將在下邊一一列出,大約有170多條吧。要寫好作文,這些東西是最好用的武器。我經(jīng)常在寫作的時(shí)候,表達(dá)一個(gè)意思,有好幾種方式可以利用,往往為到底用哪一個(gè)最好而發(fā)愁。這些句型大家一定要應(yīng)用的非常熟練;有了這些句型,在寫作過程中,能有效的避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和詞匯選用錯(cuò)誤;在考試前一個(gè)月里,每天把這些句型快速的抄寫一遍,寫作的時(shí)候很有效果;在考試前一個(gè)月內(nèi),最好每天寫一篇作文,時(shí)間就在25分鐘內(nèi)完成250字(題目自定,也可以是模擬題或以往的真題),寫完后,以批判的態(tài)度給自己的文章挑毛病,不求最好,只求更好;假設(shè)有兩個(gè)人參加同一個(gè)考試,他們的作文完全一樣,那么他們得到的分?jǐn)?shù)也一定一樣嗎???這可不一定,因?yàn)閷懗鰜淼淖魑木砻娌灰粯?,給評(píng)分老師的感覺不同,分?jǐn)?shù)相差3分左右很正常。因此,我強(qiáng)烈建議大家:1,在寫作的時(shí)候,一定要注意卷面整潔,作文當(dāng)中不要出現(xiàn)涂抹的痕跡,寫單詞的時(shí)候,詞匯之間要有足夠的間距,詞匯書寫清晰,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用規(guī)范,寫的作文 能讓評(píng)分老師不費(fèi)勁就能一看到底。呵呵,千萬別忘記了,考試的時(shí)間一般都是氣溫比較冷,而我們這些考生習(xí)慣了用電腦,手寫的少。如果能養(yǎng)成這個(gè)好習(xí)慣,寫 作得19分是完全有可能的。2,一定要寫到250字左右,這也是一個(gè)竅門。當(dāng)你寫的字?jǐn)?shù)大約就200字多一點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,評(píng)分老師有可能認(rèn)為你的字?jǐn)?shù)不夠,那你可就虧大了。如果你寫到了250字,錯(cuò)判的情況無論如何不會(huì)出現(xiàn),而且老師會(huì)覺得你的寫作水平很高,得高分是理所當(dāng)然。3,翻譯,也存在類似的情況。請(qǐng)注意,這些句型不是一成不邊的,完全可以根據(jù)需要靈活處理 one’s chance of doing ??’t choose but do?..。Have no choice but do ?? 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