【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 認(rèn)為40％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1．不應(yīng)該收門(mén)票2．公園是公眾休閑的地方3．如收門(mén)票，需建大門(mén)、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象1．應(yīng)收門(mén)票，但票價(jià)不要太高2．支付園林工人工資3．購(gòu)新花木注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2．詞數(shù)：100左右。3．參考詞匯：門(mén)票entrance feeDear Editor．I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrancefee should be charged for parks．高考滿分作文1(1號(hào)題)Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for % of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding the end a city will take on a bad % of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a we share the same opinion, dear editor?Yours truly,Li Hua高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文第二篇Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on the sametime, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working you agree with me, dear editor?Yours truly,Li HuaDear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be city will not look so beautiful as it should percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?Yours truly,Li Hua高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文第四篇Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%.They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four so, city will not look as beautiful as it , those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%.They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and truth lies in the hands of the my argument stand to reason, dear editor?Yours truly,Li HuaDear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for I right, editor?Yours truly,Li Hua第三篇：2016年全國(guó)卷高考滿分作文2016年全國(guó)卷高考滿分作文 要求：結(jié)合材料的內(nèi)容和寓意，選好角度，確定立意，明確文體，自擬題目。不要套作，不得抄襲。一點(diǎn)進(jìn)步，一種人生暮色暗淡，殘陽(yáng)如血。北方的風(fēng)凜冽地刮著，刮得人生疼。一個(gè)十八歲的少女坐在河邊，手里拿著最后一次的?？季?，上面的分?jǐn)?shù)令她心寒。她考差了，離自己夢(mèng)想的學(xué)校還差了好多，然而更令她傷心的是，她的父母非但沒(méi)有安慰她，反而將她痛罵了一頓。女孩于殘陽(yáng)中站了起來(lái)，她撕碎了手里的試卷，回到了家。沒(méi)有人知道那個(gè)夜晚女孩想了什么、想了多久。只是看見(jiàn)，從那以后，女孩仿佛在書(shū)桌旁生了根。幾個(gè)月后，女孩坐在高考考場(chǎng)上，答完了人生最重要的幾份卷。也許是好事多磨，女孩雖然比最后一次?？挤?jǐn)?shù)多出了很多，但依然未能考上夢(mèng)想院校，只因幾分。女孩流著淚在田野上使勁奔跑，最后累到躺倒在地。盛夏，農(nóng)村的夜空被點(diǎn)點(diǎn)繁星照亮，女孩睜著流著淚的眼睛，看著熱鬧的夜空，仿佛自己的夢(mèng)想跟那星星一樣離她如此遙遠(yuǎn)。這時(shí)，女孩的父親躺在了她的身邊?！皩?duì)不起，我還是沒(méi)考上，你罵我吧?！薄安?，孩子，最后一次?？剂R你是因?yàn)槟愕男母静辉趯W(xué)習(xí)上，然而后來(lái)我看到了你的努力和你的進(jìn)步。有進(jìn)步就是好的，雖然你的進(jìn)步并未幫你達(dá)成目標(biāo)，但那又怎樣？只要能進(jìn)步，在哪都能成就精彩?！备赣H的話好似一點(diǎn)燈火，點(diǎn)亮了女孩心里哪怕只有一平方厘米的地方。幾個(gè)月后，孩子聽(tīng)了父親的話，背上行囊，去了一個(gè)二本的院校，繼續(xù)著自己的人生。那后來(lái)女孩大富大貴了嗎？沒(méi)有。畢業(yè)后，女孩搭上南下的火車，找了份工作，平平淡淡地活著。只不過(guò)，不管有多平淡，她都會(huì)把生活過(guò)好，努力讓自己進(jìn)步。再后來(lái)，她結(jié)了婚，生了小孩，成為了我的母親?；蛟S是因?yàn)樽约旱慕?jīng)歷，我媽媽從小到大都不太在意我的成績(jī)，所以在別人學(xué)奧數(shù)的時(shí)候，我基本上都在扔泥巴。但我媽媽也是有底線的，她不要求我每次都要考滿分、90分，她只要求我每次進(jìn)步，哪怕只有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)。上了高中后，由于我的愛(ài)好，我學(xué)了藝術(shù)，成為了藝術(shù)生。功課落下了不少，成績(jī)自然也不算優(yōu)秀，媽媽也還是只有“進(jìn)步”一個(gè)要求。她只是不想我也像她一樣因?yàn)闆](méi)有努力和進(jìn)步而在迷霧中穿梭。如今，我走在了媽媽曾經(jīng)走過(guò)的路上，只求問(wèn)心無(wú)愧和爭(zhēng)取進(jìn)步，或許我的進(jìn)步十分微小。使我趕不上我想要搭乘的那輛列車。不過(guò)，后面其實(shí)還有很多輛車在等我，因?yàn)槲乙恢痹谂M(jìn)步，就像小樹(shù)一直在努力進(jìn)步和成就一片繁茂；就像水滴一直在努力進(jìn)步匯成一曲江河，奔向所夢(mèng)想的遠(yuǎn)方。一點(diǎn)進(jìn)步，一種不一樣的人生。點(diǎn)評(píng)：與一般考生作文寫(xiě)法不同，本文并不是千篇一律地從漫畫(huà)材料的描述分析開(kāi)始，而是用了一個(gè)別出心裁的描寫(xiě)性開(kāi)頭，營(yíng)造出一種肅穆的氣氛來(lái)吸引讀者。文章“有進(jìn)步就是好的”這個(gè)立意卻完全是從漫畫(huà)材料中來(lái)，并對(duì)成績(jī)優(yōu)劣與評(píng)價(jià)之間的關(guān)系進(jìn)行了思考，符合題意，中心突出。文似看山不喜平，本文的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)是她“成為了我的母親”，敘事的時(shí)間跨度使文章產(chǎn)生了歷史感，情感色彩從憂傷苦悶逐漸轉(zhuǎn)為平和豁達(dá)，內(nèi)容和情感豐富充實(shí)立體。母親并沒(méi)有把未實(shí)現(xiàn)的理想強(qiáng)加于女兒，對(duì)“我”的期待與評(píng)價(jià)著眼于“是否有進(jìn)步”。在追求完美、施行“虎媽狼爸”教育方式的中國(guó)父母群體中，這位母親的寬容心態(tài)顯得那么與眾不同，她或許就是考生們筆下心心念念呼喚的那位“母親”！巴掌之吻 教育之痛一張考卷，幾分浮動(dòng)，換得巴掌與吻。是耶？非耶？報(bào)以無(wú)奈苦笑。僅從表面上看，母親對(duì)從滿分降為98分的退步的孩子求全責(zé)備，而對(duì)雖然一開(kāi)始不及格、但后來(lái)進(jìn)步的孩子不吝愛(ài)吻，是不是僅說(shuō)明這位母親鼓勵(lì)進(jìn)步之可取與苛責(zé)退步之不妥呢？并非如此，撥開(kāi)表面的巴掌與吻之別，在這幅漫畫(huà)中，我們應(yīng)看到僅僅是分?jǐn)?shù)上的一點(diǎn)變化，都足以使家長(zhǎng)做出截然不同的反應(yīng)，其背后折射出的無(wú)數(shù)個(gè)家庭相似的情景，不免令人深思。緊緊盯著分?jǐn)?shù)，視分?jǐn)?shù)進(jìn)與退為獎(jiǎng)罰標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，與其產(chǎn)生的求全責(zé)備之態(tài)，并非是個(gè)別家長(zhǎng)所為。滿分得吻、98分得巴掌這一荒謬現(xiàn)象，正是被詬病許久的唯分?jǐn)?shù)論的體現(xiàn)，當(dāng)家長(zhǎng)并不在乎分?jǐn)?shù)背后反映的知識(shí)掌握情況，指導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)作用時(shí)，也就不再在意“98分已經(jīng)很接近滿分”這一事實(shí)，而是只看見(jiàn)比上次退步了2分