中考英語(yǔ)高分作文如何寫(xiě)(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ②My watch has something wrong．③My watch doesn’t （2）：我買(mǎi)這本書(shū)花了50元。It took me 50 yuan to buy this book cost me 50 spent 50yuan on this paid 50 yuan for this （3）：近十年來(lái)中國(guó)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。誤：China has taken place great changes in the last ten years．正：Great changes have taken place in China in the last ten years．分析：例1中的take place為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能帶賓語(yǔ)。有時(shí)諺語(yǔ)可以稍加改變引申使用。例如：Do in Rome as the Romans in Rome, do as the Romans you go to Rome, do as the Romans 有人按此意將這諺語(yǔ)改換使用：When in England, do as the English roads lead to also say : All roads lead to ．結(jié)構(gòu)造句與眾不同。㈠.簡(jiǎn)潔。㈡.流暢。使用副詞性連接詞，在寫(xiě)作中一定要注意發(fā)掘要點(diǎn)或句子間的邏輯聯(lián)系，從而找到并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使不同的句子間建立起有機(jī)的聯(lián)系。副詞性連接詞的位置一般放在句首，后邊常常接逗號(hào)，它能承上啟下，令讀者對(duì)后續(xù)的句子產(chǎn)生心理上的期待和準(zhǔn)備，因此整篇文章常常因它而渾然一體。以下是一些常見(jiàn)的副詞性連接詞：⒈表示增加的事實(shí)：also, besides, as well as, in addition.⒉表順序：(1).First, second, .(2).the first, the second, the third, the last.(3).To begin with, then , finally.(4).first and foremost, besides, last but not least.(5).Most important of all, what’s more, finally.(6).On the one hand, on the otherhand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)。（7）for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)。⒊ 比較對(duì)比概念：the way, just as, while ,however, on the other spite of, instead.⒋ 表結(jié)果：as a result, therefore, in this way.⒌ 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)： generally speaking, in my view, in my believeTo my knowledgefrom my point of viewI meanthat is to sayin other wordsit seems to me that⒍ 舉例：for examplefor instanceas an exampleas another examplesuch as⒎ 表讓步：although(though)no matter how(who)howeverin spite ofanyhowanyway⒏ 表強(qiáng)調(diào)：certainlyclearlysurelyto be sureafter allindeedabove allwithout doubtno doubtmost importantin factas a matter of fact 例如：As a matter of fact , he didn’t know it ,either.⒐ 總結(jié)：all in allto sum up in a word(一言以蔽之)in a wordin short請(qǐng)看一篇范文：暑假將至，同學(xué)們就自己的暑假生活安排進(jìn)行了交流。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：有的同學(xué)打算外出旅游，輕松一下；有的同學(xué)計(jì)劃在家中多讀書(shū)，為將來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)做準(zhǔn)備；有的同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備參加體育鍛煉，保持身體健康；談?wù)勛约旱氖钇诎才拧！痉段男蕾p】Dear ,Wow, so quickly!The summer holiday is ing!I feel so glad to tell you something about this summer classmates seem crazy when they talk about what they will do on of them plan to go out for a trip to relax some want to read a lot of books at want to prepare for the future are also some students hoping to take part in sport their minds, sport exercise is very important to our for me, I will go to the one hand, I want to refresh my spirit and prepare a good mood for the next the other hand, I can experience some country culture and get close to a word, I will try my best to make my holiday wishes!Yours,Monica【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】這封信按照要求將每條都寫(xiě)全了，行文流暢，思路很清晰，并將自己的暑期安排以及理由寫(xiě)出來(lái)了，用到了短語(yǔ)On one hand，On the other hand，使文章條理很清楚。也用到了一些詞組，如：In their minds，As for me，prepare a good mood for…，experience some country culture，In a word等，這些短語(yǔ)及詞匯的運(yùn)用使文章形象生動(dòng)，增色不少。因此，作為畢業(yè)班的考生，要想使自己的文章也寫(xiě)得像行家那么漂亮，我們要做的功課是，平時(shí)多積累詞匯、短語(yǔ)、句型，多看好的范文，多學(xué)習(xí)別人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，這樣我們的文章才能越寫(xiě)越好。六．結(jié)尾段的寫(xiě)法。結(jié)尾段的寫(xiě)法要取決于開(kāi)頭段以及中間部分的展開(kāi)情況。一般情況下，結(jié)尾段應(yīng)該起到回答，解決問(wèn)題，總結(jié)，概括全文，重申主題，與開(kāi)頭呼應(yīng)的作用。當(dāng)然，出乎意料的結(jié)尾如果有助于深化主題也是可取的，有時(shí)簡(jiǎn)短的一句話也可以結(jié)束全文。另外，引用名人名言作結(jié)尾也是可取的。請(qǐng)看一個(gè)結(jié)尾段的例子：題目：Helpi
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