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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 oy the pull of a big fish at the other end of the line． My enjoyment increases if the fish is in the deep waters of a lake． The hope of catching a big one lures me to the lesser known pools and the cool waters near some hidden rock． I like the quiet under the open sky away from the weekend campers and vacationists． ? There are three reasons why I like to fish． First， I enjoy the pull of a big fish at the other end of the line． Moreover， my enjoyment increases if the fish is in the deep waters of a lake． Second， the hope of catching a big one lures me to the lesser known pools and the cool waters near some hidden rock． Finally， I like the quiet under the open sky away from the weekend campers and vacationists． Of the three reasons， I prefer the last． ? 3．句式多變，節(jié)奏明快 為了使段落靈活多樣，擴(kuò)展句除了要有說(shuō) 服力，邏輯清楚以外，還要有多變的句 式，否則段落語(yǔ)言會(huì)顯得單調(diào)呆板，語(yǔ)言 水平低下。如長(zhǎng)短句、簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句并 用可以使段落具有節(jié)奏感。 讀起來(lái)才有活 力，令人回味 。 可以混合使用簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句和短語(yǔ)等 There are also many quiet, private things that I enjoy doing. (主從復(fù)合句 )I would spend a whole day reading a book, and I sometime stay up late at night reading a good novel.(并列句 )When I am tired of physical activities, I may find a good movies or a light TV program very entertaining.(主從復(fù)合句 ) In short, I like to do many different kinds of things, depending on the mood I am in and the kind of people I am in and the kind of people I am around.(簡(jiǎn)單句，分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ) ) ? skills ? Language ?A. 平行結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用 句式優(yōu)美、表達(dá)清晰、重點(diǎn)突出 ? 主題句： Pc games are a kind of entertainment. 利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)拓展為 : They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond quickly, stimulate their imagination in electronics. ? ? 若文中的簡(jiǎn)單句出現(xiàn)得太多 ,就會(huì)顯得單調(diào)、含混、不生動(dòng)。要寫出生動(dòng)而鮮明的句子 ,可通過(guò)喬姆斯基的轉(zhuǎn)化生成語(yǔ)法中的嵌入方式來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn) .一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句 ,嵌入定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、補(bǔ)語(yǔ)后 ,變得生動(dòng)有趣。 ? Eg: Books are worth reading. ? Books telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading. ? ? Attach great importance to ? Leave a deep impression on ? ? 啟承轉(zhuǎn)合 ? 根據(jù)在文章中的作用 , 過(guò)渡詞大致可以分為以下四類 ? (1) 表達(dá)“啟”的常用詞語(yǔ) : 用于引導(dǎo)主題句 , 或用于主題句的后面 , 引導(dǎo)第一個(gè)發(fā)展句。 ?A proverb says...... At present....... ?As the proverb says.... Currently..... ?Generally speaking, .... Now,.... ?In general, ..... On the Whole.... ?It is clear that.... Recently..... ?It is often said that.... ?Without doubt, ....... ? (2) 表達(dá)“承”的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ) : 用于承接主題句或第一個(gè)(或前一個(gè) )發(fā)展句。 ? First (of all), ...... Moreover, ......... ? Firstly, ............ No one can deny that.... ? In the first place, ......... Obviously..... ? To begin with, ......... Of course, ......... ? Also, ....... Similarly,......... ? At the same time...... Therefore, we should realize that..... ? Certainly...... There is no doubt that....... ? In addition,...
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