dxzgna雅思大作文題型分析與解題(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 frequent ways to relax, though it is not very health. For instance, the rates of some certain diseases are considerably higher among those chainsmokers. People even argue that smoking causes serious social problems thus should be forbidden. Personally, I am with them.4分：長(zhǎng)度不夠，走題，瞎寫(xiě)。5分：語(yǔ)言和結(jié)構(gòu)都有明顯嚴(yán)重的不足。很多句子僅僅是英文單詞寫(xiě)成的，可能語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤明顯或者不明顯，但是句子內(nèi)容沒(méi)有意義，或者幾乎沒(méi)有意義。（裸考）locationwitnessXXX年 has witness XXX6分：語(yǔ)言基本ok，詞匯能夠夠用，結(jié)構(gòu)完整（有議論文的樣子），有一定的論據(jù)列舉。(上面的四點(diǎn)某一點(diǎn)不足，另外一方面的優(yōu)秀能平衡)7分：語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)多樣性，unmon詞匯的精確運(yùn)用。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，部分論據(jù)比較深刻精彩。8分：很好的寫(xiě)作水平+很好的英語(yǔ)運(yùn)用能力。9分：沒(méi)有任何標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，就是好。Simple amp。 Elegantbody第二段開(kāi)頭216。 ：(概括following 1段)功能: 我之所以支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是有如下的幾個(gè)理由的。 Several reasons can be offered to prove that there are many benefits if…. It is obvious to see that profits are in the main position if... Convincing arguments can be delivered to show that………178。 第一個(gè)論據(jù)（理由）To start with//in the first place//the first thing/reason that es into my mind is…//What strikes me first is that…178。 解釋(可選)That is to say//more specifically//more precisely speaking……several reasons………..To start with, “fittest survives” is the basic principle of nature. That is to say, /(More …. speaking), even we do not protect them, some animals extinct. 178。 例子編 ：可信，有用 in my country, in the city where I live,改編It is easy to take it as a convincing example that 句子A.We can easily find N a good example.For example, 句子A.藍(lán)色部分X2（1）216。 讓步178。 提出反方論點(diǎn)但是，有人持有別的意見(jiàn)也是有道理有原因的。However//on the other hand//in contrast//。, those people who believe/…/…/ that(B觀點(diǎn)/反方觀) seem to possess their own views/reasons. 1 Apart from the benefits mentioned above, by no means should we ignore the fact that there are still some downsides of..1 馬斯洛理論 Admittedly, + B觀點(diǎn)/反方觀點(diǎn). (別抄題目： 2. 我的語(yǔ)言能力很蒼白)216。216。 總結(jié)(強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn)，重申)From all above//to sum up//in conclusion//…, though (概括反方觀點(diǎn)) …,we can not avoid accepting the truth that 正方觀點(diǎn)…建議：如果可以做點(diǎn)事情把我選擇的觀點(diǎn)變得更加完美，未來(lái)就會(huì)更加美好。With the cooperation devoted by various social groups, we can confidently cherish the hope that 預(yù)測(cè)…選擇的觀點(diǎn)—不完美(讓步)支持的觀點(diǎn)—不完美(我沒(méi)有支持的觀點(diǎn):原因)a or disagree12 正(23)3 反4 總分析原因：尾巴Diverse causes//factors contribute to …lead toTraffic jam is one the most serious problems in a city’s transportation.Diverse factors lead to the traffic jam in the modern city.原因有很多（。）Firstly and most importantly, 。原因 + solutions It can not be forgotten that…原因+solutionsThe reason/problem that… should also be taken into consideration. +原因+ solution216。 提出解決方法 It is not simple to make this solved though impossible is nothing.（解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題不容易，但是也有辦法）To ease this problem, the first action we should take is n./that/ to do …(Fortunately), 名詞(詞組) can also serve as an effective solution.Last but not the least, 名詞(詞組)/it could be taken into the approaches to make it decrease/improve/do /better/solved /adj. if+方法3預(yù)測(cè)How brightening the future will be!!!2008年共進(jìn)行了46次雅思考試，也就是說(shuō)共有46道大作文題目。按照話題，教育類依然是占主要位置，共考察23次，占到了總數(shù)的50%。工作生活8道，環(huán)境保護(hù)5道，犯罪4道，科技4道，文化旅游3道，媒體3道，政府2道，社會(huì)1道。當(dāng)當(dāng)當(dāng)當(dāng)?。。?！劍七Test 1 05/8/13It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to bee a good sportsperson or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opi
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