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w much you read but what you read really matters. 1. [優(yōu)化 ] It is not how much you read but what you read that really matters. 三.強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句變換 2. [原文 ] By making good use of inter we can make a difference in our life. 2. [優(yōu)化 ] Only by making good use of inter can we make a difference in our life. 適當(dāng)運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句可以起到突出,強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用,達(dá)到較強(qiáng)的修飾效果,給讀者留下深刻印象. 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 3. [原文 ] We have grown so old because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate. 3. [優(yōu)化 ] It is because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate, that we have grown so old. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 1. [原文 ] When I look into the future, I will try my best to serve my fellow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union. 1. [優(yōu)化 ] Looking into the future, I will try my best to serve my fellow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union. 四.非謂語(yǔ)句和從句變換 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞包括不定式/動(dòng)名詞/現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞可以在有限的空間內(nèi)表達(dá)更多的信息,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,邏輯嚴(yán)密. 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 2. [原文 ] The law can punish those who produce or sell fake modities. 2. [優(yōu)化 ] The law can punish those producing or selling fake modities. 3. [原文 ] Because one of my parents is laid off, my family won’t possibly afford all my expenses at college. 3. [優(yōu)化 ] With one of my parents being laid off, my family won’t possibly afford all my expenses at college. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 1. [原文 ] Some students don’t like having roommates. Because every person has his or her own way, they think several people living together causes some unpleasantness. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship. 1. [優(yōu)化 ] Some students don’t like having roommates. they think several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship. 五.松散句和掉尾變換 松散句主要用來陳述觀點(diǎn)和羅列事實(shí),因此文中絕大多數(shù)句子都是松散句,正是由于這個(gè)緣故,偶爾使用掉尾句會(huì)起到突出的效果,但如果頻繁的使用掉尾句,則會(huì)使文章的意思表達(dá)不夠直接名了,給讀者做作的感覺. 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 2. [原文 ] A new pattern of urban living has emerged in most big cities, as many of urban dwellers have moved