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第一章 句式優(yōu)化 不同的思想內(nèi)容當(dāng)然應(yīng)該用不同的句式來表達(dá).而同一思想內(nèi)容也可以用不同句式來表達(dá).句式不同,表達(dá)的效果就不同.一篇文章中如果反復(fù)使用同一句式,就會(huì)顯得單調(diào)乏味,毫無生氣,寫作時(shí)一定要注意句式的變換,避免單一重復(fù). 長(zhǎng)句使文章富有氣勢(shì),卻容易產(chǎn)生語法錯(cuò)誤或造成理解障礙;短句不容易出錯(cuò),但是短句的堆砌容易讓人感覺語言技巧不成熟,不老練. 在實(shí)際寫作中,一味地采用長(zhǎng)句或短句都是不可取的,要注意長(zhǎng)短句的交錯(cuò)使用. 通常簡(jiǎn)單而又實(shí)用的長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)方法是:以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),配以適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)合句.簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短,一般要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語,不定式短語,介詞短語,副詞短語等. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 1. [原文 ] Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them. 1. [優(yōu)化 ] Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them. 受漢語思維習(xí)慣影響,很多考生往往會(huì)直接將腦子里的意思議程英語,而忽略句與句之間的聯(lián)系,導(dǎo)致寫出來的句子無法體現(xiàn)英語作為 “ 形合語言 ” 的特點(diǎn).因此,在平時(shí)寫作時(shí),考生要注意前后句之間的聯(lián)系,用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將簡(jiǎn)單句連接起來,組成準(zhǔn)確地道的復(fù)雜長(zhǎng)句.增加文章的氣勢(shì). 一.長(zhǎng)句和短句變換 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 3. [原文 ] Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty. 3. [優(yōu)化 ] Pressured by school work. and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 2. [原文 ] Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation. 2. [優(yōu)化 ] Usually, a fact is defined as a truth, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation. 1. 短句變長(zhǎng)句 4. [原文 ] When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbikes. The car was yellow. The motorbike fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two person’s injuries. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. the traffic police arrived in a short time. 4. [優(yōu)化 ] When I turned right on the corner, a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two person’s injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time, the traffic police arrived. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 一.長(zhǎng)句和短句變換 1. [原文 ] His father, who is a salesman, b