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ool is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示,可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述,注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài),及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。3.(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運(yùn)動(dòng)來放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),寫作要點(diǎn)要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。4.寫作“百善孝為先”,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英語報(bào)社正在舉辦以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你以“We should honor our parents”為題,寫一篇短文參加征文活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括: What do you often do for your parents? Why should we honor our parents? How should we honor our parents? 要求: 1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫; 2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)); 4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of 【答案】We should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of honor my often help my parents do housework in my spare think it39。s our duty to honor our parents take much effort to raise us, so it39。s important for us to honor love us so we should love and respect them. First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of , we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after , we should respect them and never talk to them 39。d better municate with them patiently if we have different 39。s also important to tell our parents we love them.【解析】【分析】本題要求考生以“我們應(yīng)該尊敬我們的父母”為題結(jié)合所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),寫一篇作文【詳解】這是篇材料作文,主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已給,所以考生要圍繞著要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行寫作,不要遺漏,當(dāng)然順序可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整。這篇作文又句型亮點(diǎn),例如:As we know,…眾所周知;.I think it39。s our duty to do sth等等,其次文章結(jié)構(gòu)也比較清晰,例如第二段的銜接詞,F(xiàn)irst of all,Then,Next,使用的簡(jiǎn)單而恰當(dāng)。5.回首三年,相信你有滿滿的回憶。在你將踏上新的旅程之際,請(qǐng)給新入學(xué)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們兩則初中生活的建議,并說說原因,讓他們的初中生活更加精彩。請(qǐng)參考下面的思維導(dǎo)圖用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activitiesMy Advice for Junior High【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and fortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如as a student,must be,filled with,get used to,relax ourselves,two pieces of advice,fall into,join new clubs,take up,not only…but also,make more friends,be helpful to等。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)To help you get used to the junior high life, I will s