【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。3．書面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語自主課程研究。通過搜集資料，你查找到中國青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美兩國親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork (%)Pocket money (20%)注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對(duì)中美兩國親子關(guān)系問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。行文連貫、自然，表達(dá)流暢。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。4．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個(gè)錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個(gè)消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對(duì)玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū) munity 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主 owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Story of LinglingLast week_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Story of LinglingLast Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the munity. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the munity. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good should learn from her.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小