【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 0%)注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國(guó)青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來(lái)敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。行文連貫、自然，表達(dá)流暢。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。4．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。5．書面表達(dá)常州市政府發(fā)文，從2019年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。注意?1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 表達(dá)，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護(hù)環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問(wèn)題。如，火災(zāi)……3