【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 幾點(diǎn)建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 初中科目更多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；2. 鍛煉身體，保持健康；3. 參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，使學(xué)校生活豐富；4. 多讀書(shū)，多交朋友；5. 補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法。注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)：60－80；3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4. 短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：method n. 方法　club n．社團(tuán)　colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫(xiě)的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開(kāi)頭兩句很自然地過(guò)渡到正文上來(lái)。用了短語(yǔ)和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來(lái)一些過(guò)渡詞或短語(yǔ)，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。4．旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請(qǐng)以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右； 【答案】例文 Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．假如你是光明中學(xué)的李陽(yáng)，你看到了動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織Animal Group的招聘信息，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)主要提示，給Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario寫(xiě)一封郵件，并表達(dá)自己想當(dāng)志愿者的意愿。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：。 Group介紹自己。( 1) 我是李陽(yáng)，15歲。(2) 喜歡喂養(yǎng)小動(dòng)物，運(yùn)動(dòng)，讀書(shū)。 (3) 樂(lè)于助人，有愛(ài)心。3．至少說(shuō)出兩點(diǎn)你想要參加動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織的原因。 Dear Mr. Mario , How are you doing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________