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幾點建議。內容要點如下:1. 初中科目更多,好的學習方法很重要;2. 鍛煉身體,保持健康;3. 參加社團活動,使學校生活豐富;4. 多讀書,多交朋友;5. 補充一兩點個人想法。注意:1. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;2. 詞數:60-80;3. 內容連貫,不要逐條翻譯;4. 短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。參考詞匯:method n. 方法 club n.社團 colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,自己即將畢業(yè),給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。結合所給的材料,可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般將來時,以第一人稱為主,要注意主謂一致,所寫的句子要符合英語語法,用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點:本文結構緊湊,開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式,如:graduate from畢業(yè)于;share sth with sb和某人分享某事;wait for等候等,用來一些過渡詞或短語,如:Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等,上下文銜接很自然。4.旅行是學習的最好方式之一。請以“Travelling”為題,根據以下思維導圖的提示,寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表你的看法。注意:1. 要點齊全,適當發(fā)揮; 2. 從思維導圖Sayings部分,選擇恰當的格合理利用在短文中; 3. 詞數:100詞左右; 【答案】例文 Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如one of the best ways,learn much,an exact picture of,a careful observer,seeing is believing,no matter,a lot等。而非謂語動詞結構Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ,豐富了短文內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。5.假如你是光明中學的李陽,你看到了動物保護組織Animal Group的招聘信息,請你依據主要提示,給Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario寫一封郵件,并表達自己想當志愿者的意愿。寫作要點:。 Group介紹自己。( 1) 我是李陽,15歲。(2) 喜歡喂養(yǎng)小動物,運動,讀書。 (3) 樂于助人,有愛心。3.至少說出兩點你想要參加動物保護組織的原因。 Dear Mr. Mario , How are you doing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________