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o?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after ,I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事;文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋!驹斀狻?,用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事,根據(jù)提示,描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí),描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題,文句通順?!芭懿健?,正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格,通過克服困難、不懈地努力,堅(jiān)持跑步,到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑;結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響;文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,前后呼應(yīng)。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;狀語從句so…that …;比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等;短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 3.寫作“百善孝為先”,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英語報(bào)社正在舉辦以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你以“We should honor our parents”為題,寫一篇短文參加征文活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括: What do you often do for your parents? Why should we honor our parents? How should we honor our parents? 要求: 1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫; 2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)); 4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of 【答案】We should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of honor my often help my parents do housework in my spare think it39。s our duty to honor our parents take much effort to raise us, so it39。s important for us to honor love us so we should love and respect them. First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of , we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after , we should respect them and never talk to them 39。d better municate with them patiently if we have different 39。s also important to tell our parents we love them.【解析】【分析】本題要求考生以“我們應(yīng)該尊敬我們的父母”為題結(jié)合所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),寫一篇作文【詳解】這是篇材料作文,主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已給,所以考生要圍繞著要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行寫作,不要遺漏,當(dāng)然順序可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整。這篇作文又句型亮點(diǎn),例如:As we know,…眾所周知;.I think it39。s our duty to do sth等等,其次文章結(jié)構(gòu)也比較清晰,例如第二段的銜接詞,F(xiàn)irst of all,Then,Next,使用的簡單而恰當(dāng)。4.回首三年,相信你有滿滿的回憶。在你將踏上新的旅程之際,請(qǐng)給新入學(xué)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們兩則初中生活的建議,并說說原因,讓他們的初中生活更加精彩。請(qǐng)參考下面的思維導(dǎo)圖用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activitiesMy Advice for Junior High【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and fortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如as a student,must be,filled with,get used to,relax ourselves,two pieces of advice,fall into,join new clubs,take up,not only…but also,make more friends,be helpful to等。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and fortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5.近年來,各大城市霧霾(haze)情況越來越嚴(yán)重,整個(gè)國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象,原因,應(yīng)對(duì)措施,寫一份英文的倡議書,呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境,減少對(duì)空氣的污染。要點(diǎn)提示:(1)我國空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。(至少寫2點(diǎn))(2) 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。(至少寫2點(diǎn))(3)減少空氣污染的措施。(至少寫2點(diǎn))要求:(1) 80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(2)