【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。3．假如你是李明，5月18日星期六這一天，你與幾位同班同學一起參觀了水上公園 (Water Park)。請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇日記。(1)，游客多；(2)上午劃船，下午看了許多動物，例如…：(3)碰到幾位外國朋友并與他們交談：(4)看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊等不良現(xiàn)象：(5)你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊cut in line要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80?100個。(2)短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)(3)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮?May 18, Saturday Fine Today I visited Water Park with several of my 【答案】May 18, Saturday FineToday I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。動筆前應根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切，在寫作時主語用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。同時注意時間狀語與時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當使用連詞，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤，做到語意連貫。【點睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀題目要求，結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應對考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。4．假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考要點：(時間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……)；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時，要注意理順要點，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查字數(shù)是否符合要求。參考要點：(時間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……)；。5．今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫