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nk that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn),不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型。【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來說是…的。6.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請全班同學(xué)參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶; ;; 。不開心的事情; 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校;2. 能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友;3. 請你補(bǔ)充(至少兩點(diǎn))My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容,學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài),并注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回憶;然后是不開心的事情;最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示,但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語,應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話,并用英語表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn);第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充,注意應(yīng)合情合理,與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用,提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、自然?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,回憶了自己的初中生活,并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情;最后一段對(duì)未來進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體,表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。7.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下:1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途;2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議(至少 3 點(diǎn));3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢,把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save