【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。3． 假如你是李華, 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua@ china. From: bill006@ america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。【詳解】首先回答職業(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。4．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個(gè)錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個(gè)消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對(duì)玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū) munity 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主 owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Story of LinglingLast week_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Story of LinglingLast Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the munity. Lingling picked up her wallet and