【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。6．題目②“持之以恒，方得始?！眻猿质且环N可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅持”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅持的一件事（愛好，習慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談談自己的感受?！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健?，正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達多樣。 ”7．俗話說，國有國法，家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國家主席習近平多次強調(diào)良好家風家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況，給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。要點提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼，禮貌待人誠實守信，不斷學習按時作息，杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:，可適當發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________