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un together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結(jié)合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。5.書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動,你們班開展了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。?識歷史悠久,深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬(至少1點)偶 像梅西,有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬(至少1點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。要求仔?xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。要依?jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點:本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達清楚;同時,本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達生動;用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。6.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況,給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介紹一下你的家規(guī),并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。要點提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!