【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。5．假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題： ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。6．中央電視臺《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出，再次激發(fā)了人們對經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己，讓讀書伴隨我們成長。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或—首詩，并建議大家多讀書，讀好書。要點(diǎn)提示：讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識，開闊眼界；2. 提升自我，增強(qiáng)自信……讀過的一本書或一首詩1. 作品內(nèi)容簡介；2. 讀書感悟及對自己的影響。多讀書，讀好書1. 利用閑暇時間多讀書，養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣；2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：classic 經(jīng)典作品； open up one’s eyes 開闊眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 責(zé)任；cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.