【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 d sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。考點：考查提綱作文。2．A解析：例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文，主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。注意時態(tài)的運(yùn)用，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。切記不要遺漏要點。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對他的生活的意義。：單詞短語：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時，形容詞放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句?！军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時，形容詞放后面等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。3．D解析：I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點，注意理順要點，防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。4．E解析：With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。5．B解析：The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。6．A解析：In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her unti