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不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶; ;; 。不開心的事情; 。未來(lái)展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校;2. 能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友;3. 請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充(至少兩點(diǎn))My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容,學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài),并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回憶;然后是不開心的事情;最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示,但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ),應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話,并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn);第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充,注意應(yīng)合情合理,與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用,提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、自然?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,回憶了自己的初中生活,并展望了未來(lái)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情;最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體,表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ),如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。6. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。7.近來(lái),美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._______________________________