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y a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式,注意在表達不同觀點時,連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣?!军c睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。6. 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來,同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上,同學(xué)們進行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的討論,請你根據(jù)提示和要求,并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗,發(fā)表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名?!敬鸢浮緿ear students,I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點,其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗,發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。寫作亮點:首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達出自己的觀點(認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次,開始具體陳述觀點,陳述的時候要適當(dāng)使用實例,相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識,think over the difficulties來回思考難點,Little by little一點一點地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點亮點,就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。7.書面表達(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語校刊《英語天地》對此進行調(diào)查,假如你是一名校刊小記者,請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進行總結(jié),并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________