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akes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語,題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面:首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語表達(dá)出來,還應(yīng)注意補充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實;最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾,如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主,簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等詞,敘述條理、有層次;最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確,用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。6. 書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來,同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上,同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的討論,請你根據(jù)提示和要求,并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗,發(fā)表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。【答案】Dear students,I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點,其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗,發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。寫作亮點:首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達(dá)出自己的觀點(認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次,開始具體陳述觀點,陳述的時候要適當(dāng)使用實例,相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識,think over the difficulties來回思考難點,Little by little一點一點地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點亮點,就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。7.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況,給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介紹一下你的家規(guī),并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。要點提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________