【文章內容簡介】
表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5.近來,美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關報道之后也很想學好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明,請你根據以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學好漢語,題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內容應包括以下幾個方面:首先應和Sam先做一個交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語表達出來,還應注意補充一些內容,使文章更加充實;最后寫一個適當?shù)慕Y尾,如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結構考慮,寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結構或主系表結構為主,簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達流暢?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等詞,敘述條理、有層次;最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,句式結構符合英語的表達習慣。語法規(guī)范、準確,用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結構為主,也使用了并列句和復合句,調整了文章的結構。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。6.題目②“持之以恒,方得始?!眻猿质且环N可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網站正在開展以“堅持”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅持的一件事(愛好,習慣……),你是怎樣做的,以及你的感受。提示詞語:keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題:1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after ,I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,根據所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事;文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談談自己的感受。【詳解】,用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事,根據提示,描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時,描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題,文句通順?!芭懿健?,正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初