【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。5．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文．（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and clear）．3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄（narrow）．4街道寬闊（wide），干凈整潔5居住條件（livingconditions）差5生活越來越好，環(huán)境（environment）越來越舒適．6你的感想…（寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown． 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所