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dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);: 不少于70詞(開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想,正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。6.假設(shè)你是來自中國(guó)的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國(guó)外冬令營(yíng),看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁(yè)后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營(yíng)期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括:;(包含冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座);。作文要求:;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名;,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份,給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分:首先是介紹自己的身份;然后寫留言的目的,包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座;最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫作時(shí),應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求,組織語言,串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型,保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式,提升文章檔次和水平,使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目要求的所有信息,沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述:首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的;接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望;最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好,那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第一人稱、一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語法規(guī)范,符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型,如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ;From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ;And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。7.人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many