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ll eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。d like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5. 書面表達暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點僅供參考,允許適當發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮.寫作中,應注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述.語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣.適當使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學會微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。參考詞匯: 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,不要逐字翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________