【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。5．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文．（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．內(nèi)容要點：過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and clear）．3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄（narrow）．4街道寬闊（wide），干凈整潔5居住條件（livingconditions）差5生活越來越好，環(huán)境（environment）越來越舒適．6你的感想…（寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown． 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．目前，許多中學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。要點： 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習(xí)慣3. 時間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學(xué)會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學(xué)?；蛲瑢W(xué)的建議……（至少一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略7．寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made some