【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 的幫助，也要學會幫助他人。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6．目前，許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。要點： 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習慣3. 時間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學?；蛲瑢W的建議……（至少一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略7．書面表達假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。俱樂部的同學們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。寫作要點：1表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。2介紹活動的情況：