【正文】 verybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。課余還經(jīng)常一起打球唱歌。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。16．（d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。在你班的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“團(tuán)結(jié)友善”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。14．（ 13．（ 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄f(shuō)明理由。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應(yīng)用。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無(wú)涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來(lái)需要靠不斷努力來(lái)創(chuàng)造。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開放性話題作文，針對(duì)很多人成了“手機(jī)控”這一現(xiàn)象，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。結(jié)合事例，談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)，以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動(dòng)。6．（5．（提示詞語(yǔ)： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問(wèn)題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。本句話是由and連接的并列句。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過(guò)了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無(wú)法忘記的。這篇作文要求學(xué)生們介紹一下自己的初中生活。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，并且結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。3．（時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。江蘇中考模擬） 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。安徽中考模擬）李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。注意：可以圍繞主題，根據(jù)要求，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。：高分短語(yǔ)： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語(yǔ)和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認(rèn)真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)表達(dá)。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績(jī)？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。要求；，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。要求,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。（1）對(duì)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣起著至關(guān)重要的作用。湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)”（簡(jiǎn)稱“創(chuàng)文活動(dòng)”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學(xué)校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導(dǎo)文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。全?guó)中考模擬）三年的初中生活接近尾聲，回首過(guò)去你充滿依戀，展望未來(lái)你豪情滿懷。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如I39。17．（s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。北京中考模擬）善待他人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要