【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。北京中考模擬）“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。本句話(huà)是由and連接的并列句。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。提示詞語(yǔ):kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問(wèn)題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。短文中長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富于變化，有節(jié)奏感。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過(guò)了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無(wú)法忘記的。（英語(yǔ)）初中英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編(一)解題方法和技巧及練習(xí)題及解析一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編1．（這篇作文要求學(xué)生們介紹一下自己的初中生活。另一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣是不一樣的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句式整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，并且結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰。短文中還使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話(huà)題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。3．（School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。江蘇中考模擬） 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。【詳解】這是篇材料作文，所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給的比較零碎，不完整，所以考生需要結(jié)合實(shí)際情況補(bǔ)充完整，是文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。安徽中考模擬）李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。Dear Jessica, I39。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑 （jog），不僅促進(jìn)環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，而且有益身體健康，可謂一舉兩得。注意：可以圍繞主題，根據(jù)要求，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時(shí)要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：高分短語(yǔ)： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書(shū)寫(xiě)前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱(chēng)（第一人稱(chēng)）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫(xiě)是