【正文】 某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“團(tuán)結(jié)友善”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。在你班的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。16．（靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。課余還經(jīng)常一起打球唱歌。14．（作文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?13．（5. 最后要提出安全的要求。 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點(diǎn)。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。請(qǐng)你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄f明理由。12．（寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。開頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來介紹我們?cè)谏巾斏习l(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達(dá)我們的感受?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應(yīng)用。10．（句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。最后總結(jié)并發(fā)出呼吁。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開放性話題作文，針對(duì)很多人成了“手機(jī)控”這一現(xiàn)象，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談自己的觀點(diǎn)。很多人成了“手機(jī)控”。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎?，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)合事例，談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)，以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者。山東初三）你知道 年最受歡迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么嗎？“Plogging”，一邊撿垃圾，一邊慢跑， 正逐漸走進(jìn)我們的生活。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求：〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。6．（Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新。5．（2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________