【正文】 （英語）初中英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編(一)解題方法和技巧及練習(xí)題及解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）寫作。Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （畢業(yè)）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.1. How your junior school life is.2. Things/moments that you won’t forget.3. The regrets in the three years.4. Plans for your future.5. A natural ending.【答案】I39。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無法忘記的。這篇作文要求學(xué)生們介紹一下自己的初中生活。題目中列出了一些要點(diǎn)，如初中生活的感受、難忘的事情或時(shí)刻、后悔的事情、未來的計(jì)劃，然后再加上一個(gè)自然的結(jié)尾。寫作時(shí)，我們就可以利用這些要點(diǎn)來組織語言，充實(shí)文章的內(nèi)容。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。另一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不一樣的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句式整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型?？梢远嘤煤唵尉洌缰髦^賓結(jié)構(gòu)、主系表結(jié)構(gòu)等，點(diǎn)綴一些并列句和復(fù)合句或較高級(jí)的句型，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。合理安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，注意語句之間的銜接，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，并且結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰。短文首先介紹了自己對(duì)三年初中生活、老師以及同學(xué)們的感受；然后介紹了自己在這三年里后悔的事情；接下來是對(duì)未來的計(jì)劃以及對(duì)老師和同學(xué)們的祝福。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，謂語動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中長短句結(jié)合，使文章富于變化，有節(jié)奏感。短文中還使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。2．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。3．（天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長和老師。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。4．（北京中考模擬）“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅?，以及為什么這樣做。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,___