啟明中學(xué)徐明芳(存儲(chǔ)版)
【正文】 作者決心及態(tài)度，水到渠成。特別是一些能體現(xiàn)文章特色的短語，如 have a great influence on和 cultivate the saving consciousness,以及一些鏗鏘有力的排比句，提升了文章的檔次。 ? ①節(jié)約用水對(duì)我們?nèi)祟惖闹匾?。?fù)合句多處使用，提升了文章的檔次，使文章亮點(diǎn)倍出，風(fēng)采非凡，值得其他同學(xué)效仿。 ? （ 1）詞匯： ? do sports, favorite,play fotball (basktball, volleyball,pingpong ete), energtic, take part in,healthy,keep fit,active (2)句式： ① It’s very good for us and is also can make us healthy. ② To do more sports can help our studies. ③ My favourite sport is playing pingpong. ④ To do morning exercises is also can make our much healthier. ⑤ What’s more, a healthy body can help us stdy better and live a happier life ? （ 1）安排以上信息點(diǎn)在文中的邏輯關(guān)系。寫作內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)的關(guān)鍵就應(yīng)放在結(jié)構(gòu)的安排及語言的組織上。 （ 4）文章中加入個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)?？傊?，無論是結(jié)構(gòu)的安排，還是語言的表達(dá)，都足以顯示出作者扎實(shí)的英語語言功底和駕馭語言的能力，是一篇值得推薦的佳作。 ? （ 1）詞匯 ? fresh， water， turn off taps， have a bath,take a shower, throw away, recycle the used water ,the last drop of water ,suggestion ? (2)句式： ? ① Weater is very important to us. ? ② We can’t live without water. ? ③ We should try our best to save water. ? ④ Taps must be turned off after being used. ? ⑤ We can also recyle the used water. ? ⑥ The last drop of water in the world is our tear. 滿分作文展示 Act now to save water Water is very important to us. We can’t live without water. But fresh water bees less and less nowadays. Some people don’t turn off taps when they finishing washing clothes or dishes. And others often have ba
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