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swim with my friends or my parents in the swimming pool. After swimming, I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more, I can put more energy into my study. so let’s do sports, and we will bee stronger and stronger. 你校準(zhǔn)備舉行“節(jié)約用水,從現(xiàn)在做起”的英語征文比賽,你打算投稿,請根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容些一篇英語短文。作者以嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)慕Y(jié)構(gòu),復(fù)雜而準(zhǔn)確的句子清晰而明了的表達(dá)了自己要表達(dá)的意思,例如: Because it’s very good for us and is also can make us healthy. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. 等,層次分明,行文連貫,適當(dāng) 使用精準(zhǔn)的過渡詞,給人一氣呵成之感。復(fù)合句多處使用,提升了文章的檔次,使文章亮點(diǎn)倍出,風(fēng)采非凡,值得其他同學(xué)效仿。另外,作者在遣詞造句能力強(qiáng),語法知識(shí)扎實(shí)。 Let’s do sports Nowadays,most of us do not pay attention to doing sports. In fact,doing sports is really important in our daily life. I think doing sports can build up our strength, give us more power and make us energetic. It can burn a lot of fat in our body. You know too much fat can cause lots of diseases. I often take an active part in the ball games, running,and jumping on the playground .I like playing football very much. I often watch a football match on Tv on Sundays. Whenever I have time, I am always playing sports with my parents or friends on the ground. After that, I usually feel excited and energetic. Besides,some sports can make us brave and insistent. So, why not do sports? 滿分揭秘: “全民健身日” 是一個(gè)標(biāo)桿,是一個(gè)推動(dòng)力。 (3)注意提取重要信息,并加以整合,不必面面俱到。 ? ( 1)詞匯: ? do sports, favorite,play fotball (basktball, volleyball,pingp