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【正文】 初中英語(yǔ)作文的修改 名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題： 1. … Joy found there was much fish in the lake. water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish. place are very dry. … Joy found there were many fish in the lake. The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes. Many places are very dry. many 用來(lái)修飾可數(shù)名詞 ,much 用來(lái)修飾不可數(shù)的名稱 many fish是“很多魚”的意思； much fish則是“很多魚肉” ：“魚的條數(shù)”，單數(shù)和復(fù)數(shù)形式相同（ two fish兩條魚） “魚的種類”時(shí)復(fù)數(shù)形式才為 fishes（ two fishes兩種魚）； 不可數(shù)名詞 時(shí)無(wú)復(fù)數(shù)形式 ,指“魚肉”： 主謂一致問(wèn)題 1. And now many rivers bees very dirty. 2. Everything are going very well. 3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday. 4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. And now many rivers bee very dirty. Everything is going very well. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. 時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題 1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last. 3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 29th Olympic Games will hold in China. The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China. Chinglish 現(xiàn)象 1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. 2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park. My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. 行文的邏輯性問(wèn)題 1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help. 2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river. 詞類錯(cuò)用 I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. 2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy. 典型病例 ? 名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題 ? 主謂一致問(wèn)題 ? 時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題 ? Chinglish 現(xiàn)象 ? 行文的邏輯性問(wèn)題 ? 詞類錯(cuò)用 請(qǐng)你當(dāng)老師 ?書面表達(dá) ? 自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上學(xué)或上班都很方便。 (6) 人稱是否用錯(cuò)。 ? 改正： There are many programs on TV。 ? 狀語(yǔ)從句舉例： If everyone does something for the environment， our hometown will bee clean and beautiful。 ? 根據(jù)題目，可適當(dāng)增加合理內(nèi)容。 ? 根據(jù)題目要求也會(huì)出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的交錯(cuò)使用，如過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比等。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列詞匯，以 “ To be polite stu
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