【正文】 漸漸地我懂事了也上學(xué)了。盡管在實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的過程中，會(huì)有很多挫折和無數(shù)的磨難，但我仍不會(huì)灰心喪氣。一如歌曲里所唱，它在辛勤的工作中；它在艱苦的勞動(dòng)里。如果一個(gè)考生的文字功底比較好，對(duì)世事有一定的洞悉和感悟，寫成詩情畫意、清新雋永的散文，不啻是一種絕佳的選擇。但他始終把工作當(dāng)事業(yè)干，樂在其中?！?. 幸福在哪里？朋友我告訴你。她為了人類的進(jìn)步和文明而活著，并為人類的文明貢獻(xiàn)了畢生的精力，因而她是幸福的，就像雨果所說的：錢包空空時(shí)，心靈即豐滿。從文體來說，當(dāng)然可以寫成議論文，談幸福的不容易，幸福的價(jià)值和意義，最后談怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的幸福。寫作其實(shí)是語文學(xué)科中對(duì)學(xué)生綜合能力考查最全面、最集中的一種方式，語文基本功方面的遣詞造句、謀篇布局、立意剪裁；語文核心素養(yǎng)方面：包括思辨能力、人文情懷、理想情操等。覺得我想要的幸福便是擁有一片自由的天空，有一個(gè)獨(dú)屬于自己的天地?！敬鸢浮课蚁胍男腋Ｐ腋Ｊ且粋€(gè)十分美妙的詞，讓每個(gè)人不知疲倦地為它努力前行。他通過泯去后天的經(jīng)過世俗熏染的“偽我”，以求返歸一個(gè)“真我”。丟掉羞澀，做一個(gè)活潑開朗的人。一件小事，一種小物，一念之間……基本上都是積極的改變。同時(shí)，在成文的時(shí)候，還要注意時(shí)代感，要有時(shí)代意識(shí)。暴風(fēng)雨，也有它存在的理由，它可以磨練你，讓你品嘗到成功的甘甜。難道我又要放棄了嗎？難道真的我什么也做不好了嗎？不，我不能就此放棄！我要努力獲得成功，徹底地改變自己！我重新拿起畫筆，不斷的練習(xí)，在我的堅(jiān)持不懈下，我終于尋到了一絲柔和的影子。不經(jīng)意的向右一瞄，我的目光便被深深牽住了。暴風(fēng)雨，也有它存在的理由，它可以平靜我們內(nèi)心的煩躁，拂走我們心底的塵埃。經(jīng)過中考的洗禮，你成了一名高中生。【解析】試題分析：這是一個(gè)填充式半命題作文，每一位考生都能有話可說，有感而發(fā)。那時(shí)候，我天真地應(yīng)了一句：“爸，等我老了，也住在這屋里。偶爾也有三三兩兩的老婆婆們聚在老屋的門口，談著那些誰會(huì)先入土的事情，平平常常地，如同拉家常一樣。而我印象中染紅老屋門口的那一抹殘陽，落了又起，起了又落。，選好角度，寫觸動(dòng)心靈的人或事，抒發(fā)真情實(shí)感。不僅是舞動(dòng)身姿，跳躍著。時(shí)間過得飛快，轉(zhuǎn)眼間到了石板唱的《最好的未來》。我唱著，唱著，慢慢進(jìn)入了歌中的世界。具體寫法見仁見智一，因人而異了。命題作文的命題內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出豐富多彩的傾向：或貼近考生生活關(guān)注個(gè)體成長，或啟迪考生思考人生哲理，或引導(dǎo)考生聚焦社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)……豐富多樣的命題，給考生作文的選材提供了更為廣闊的空間。就在這種“既要馬兒吃得少，又要馬兒好好跑”的白色恐怖下，我的學(xué)習(xí)可謂度日如年，每次看到她的嚴(yán)厲的眼神，我就暗自提醒自己，堅(jiān)持就是勝利，我是真怕??！就這樣，我在緊張充實(shí)而又自由的狀態(tài)下遨游學(xué)海，勇攀書山，成績(jī)一天天好起來，后來一直名列前茅。是啊，那時(shí)，她正年輕。點(diǎn)睛：面對(duì)紛繁復(fù)雜的大千世界，面對(duì)林林總總的成長經(jīng)歷，立意的高低關(guān)鍵在于如何能從平凡小事看到大道理，如何能由司空見慣的生活揭示出與社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)密切相關(guān)的大主題，怎樣才能看得深，怎樣才能看到事物的本質(zhì)。挫折是成功的必經(jīng)路，彩虹是橋，抵達(dá)彼岸之橋。（2）運(yùn)用細(xì)節(jié)描寫和場(chǎng)面描寫。shand.)Ow ow Ow OW OW OUCH!!!!!LUMIERE: Of course, handsome boy, you are wele here.HL: (looking around in confusion) Who said that? (He picks up thecandlestick for light, not realizing that the speaker is in hishand)LUMIERE: (Tapping him on the shoulder) Over here!HL: (Spins around, pulling LUMIERE to the other side) Where?LUMIERE: (Taps HL on the side of the head. HL looks at LUMIERE.)Allo!HL: Oh!!!! (Startled, he drops LUMIERE onto the floor.) Incredible不可思議的!COGSWORTH: (hopping over) Well, now you39。s ugliness melted away to reveal a beautiful enchantress. The princess tried to apologize, but it was too late, for she had seen that there was no love in her heart, and as punishment, she transformed her into a hideous丑惡的beast, and placed a powerful spell on the castle, and all who lived there. Ashamed of her monstrous異形的form, the beast concealed隱藏herself inside her castle, with a magic mirror as her only window to the outside world. The rose she had offered was truly an enchanted rose, which would bloom until her twentyfirst year. If she could learn to love another, and earn her love in return by the time the last petal花瓣fell, then the spell would be broken. If not, she would be doomed注定to remain a beast for all time. As the years passed, she fell into despair絕望, and lost all hope, for who could ever learn to love a beast?(We have seen a progression of stained褪色的glass windows illustrating加上插圖the narration故事, as well as BEAST shredding撕碎her portrait. The camera slowly zooms out from the castle and we see the title. Fade up on the home of BELLE. She exits the front door and begins her walk into town.)beggar man (XH) 手持飯碗,向公主(LF)乞討:give me sth to eat, I am so hungry! LF 很兇暴,口中念著咒語:馬里馬里貝貝哄…… LF開始變形(狂抓頭發(fā)……)劇情展開：帥哥a kind and brave man（HL）出場(chǎng)dangdangdangdang ……后面圍著一堆花癡，在討論。 Look! The two fat arms. They are delicious！ 看！那兩只結(jié)實(shí)的胳膊。狐貍：Oh, I have to leave now. You are too proud.哦，我必須走了。 這對(duì)你不好。 我正到處找你呢。松鼠、小猴：See you later!等會(huì)見！狐貍：See you later! My beautiful peacock. Where are you? Can you hear me?等會(huì)見！美麗的孔雀。Little Red Riding Hood. What a strange noise! Wolf：Come in， Come in. Little Red Riding Hood：(蹦跳著進(jìn)來，把籃子放在桌子上，走到床前一看，跳回幾步)Oh! What big ears! Wolf：I can listen to your sweet voice. Little Red Riding Hood：Wow! What big eyes! Wolf：I can see you pretty face. Little Red Riding Hood：Oh! What big hands. Wolf：I can hug you. Little Red Riding Hood：（跪在床前，拉起Wolf的手，邊摸邊說）Look! What a big hands? Wolf：(從床上跳起來說)I can eat you! Little Red Riding Hood：(拼命地跑)Oh！No! No! Wolf：（追到Little Red Riding Hood，做吃狀，拍拍肚子說）It’s delicious. I still sleep. I like sleeping. Hunter： (一邊拿著槍，一邊做尋找狀出場(chǎng))Where’s the wolf? Look! A door．(推門)The wolf is sleeping. Wolf：(發(fā)出呼呼的響聲) Hunter： (端起槍想打，又放下)What a big stomach! (摸摸Wolf的肚子)Grandma and Little Red Riding Hood are inside .I must be hurry．(從桌子上拿起剪刀，舉起) Look! Scissors. (做剪Wolf的肚子)Cut, cut, cut. Little Red Riding Hood/Grandma：Thank you． Hunter： Grandma ,give me some needles and thread．Little Red Riding Hood ,Give me some stones． Grandma： (從桌子上拿來針線) Little Red Riding Hood：(搬來幾個(gè)石頭)One, two, three. Hunter： (把小石頭裝進(jìn)Wolf的衣服里) Grandma： I39?；貋?。）She said “mother told me the opponent is the enemy. I couldn’t believe you.”（她說“媽媽告訴我對(duì)手就是敵人。）Oh? There are two routes. Here or there? Which one?（這里有兩條路，這兒？那兒 ？哪條?。浚㎝om, mom, help me, help me!（媽媽，媽媽，幫幫我，幫幫我。）Hare: Mom, oh, I can’t drink it all.（媽媽，哦，我喝不下了。龜兔賽跑(Hare and tortoise)小紅帽 A proud peacock 驕傲的孔雀）Mother hare: It can help you keep alert on the way.（它可以讓你精精神神的。）Tortoise: Hare, let me tell you, turn to the right.（小兔，我告訴你，向右。我不能相信你。）小紅帽 One day, Mother asked Little Red Riding Hood to take some fruits to her grandma, because Grandma was ill. On her way to Grandma39。ll thread it. Hunter： (拿起槍)Wake up! Wolf：(起床，兩手托著大肚子)My stomach is so heavy. Hunter： You big bad wolf, raise your arms! Wolf：(邊跑邊說) Help! Don’t shot me! Hunter： （開槍）Bang, bang! Wolf： (應(yīng)聲倒下) Hunter： The bad wolf is dead． Little Red Riding Hood和Grandma：Yeah! Thank you． Little Red Riding Hood、Grandma、Hunter（一起鞠躬）: Thank you． A proud peacock 驕傲的孔雀 你在哪里？ 你能聽到我在叫你嗎？孔雀（上）：Hi, I’m a peacock! Look! How pretty I am! 大家好！我是孔雀?？兹福篖ooking for me? 找我？狐貍：Oh, yes! We are holding a forest concert. Would you like to join us?哦，是的！我們要舉行一個(gè)森林音樂會(huì)。 。 你太驕傲了。他們一定美味極啦！白雪公主SW白雪公主 Q皇后 M魔鏡 H獵人 P白馬王子 D小矮人 A小動(dòng)物 音樂起， 白雪出場(chǎng) : I miss my mother, Where is my mother? Where is my mother? （下臺(tái)，找媽媽）mother…音樂起，皇后、魔鏡出場(chǎng) Q: I’m beautiful. Mirror, Mirror, who’s the most beautiful? （魔鏡）M: is muc