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sh each other. Besides, for students, please bring our own chair for a seat. The Students’ Union 應(yīng)用文評(píng)分細(xì)則:本次作文為通知,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)有三個(gè):誓師大會(huì)的時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)、大會(huì)的主要流程以及集會(huì)注意事項(xiàng),每個(gè)要點(diǎn)3分,覆蓋全部要點(diǎn),表達(dá)基本到位可給及格分9分。 all teachers and students pledging their oaths respectively。附評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):1. 總分15分,按5個(gè)檔次給分;2. 從內(nèi)容,詞匯語(yǔ)法,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三個(gè)方面考慮:1) 交際:對(duì)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的覆蓋情況,表述的清晰程度與合理性;2) 語(yǔ)言:詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用的準(zhǔn)確性,恰當(dāng)性及多樣性;3) 語(yǔ)篇:上下文銜接和全文的連貫性。英、美拼寫和詞匯用法均可接受。應(yīng)用文寫作各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔(很好);(1315分)1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。2. 雖漏掉一、兩個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。6. 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。4. 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解。2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。6. 信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。4. 較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解。第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫【參考范文】More than plump (豐滿的) and well past 40, she was wearing a red rose on her worn coat. Frank felt as though he were being split into two. So keen was his desire to follow the younger girl yet so deep was his longing for the middleaged woman whose spirit had truly panioned him. And there she stood. Her pale, plump face was gentle and sensible。saluted, and squeezed out a smile to her. “I’m F