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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。4. 較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。5. 缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。6. 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。不得分（0分)完全抄襲的；未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息的；內(nèi)容太少，無(wú)法評(píng)判的；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清的。第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)【參考范文】More than plump (豐滿(mǎn)的) and well past 40, she was wearing a red rose on her worn coat. Frank felt as though he were being split into two. So keen was his desire to follow the younger girl yet so deep was his longing for the middleaged woman whose spirit had truly panioned him. And there she stood. Her pale, plump face was gentle and sensible。 her gray eyes had a warm twinkle. His mind got plete blank for a while. It is she, the girl that had been haunting in his heart for months. He couldn’t tell his feeling, but things seemingly turned out of his expectation. Though he felt choked by the bitterness of disappointment, Frank did not hesitate. Mustering up his courage, he stepped close towards the woman, squaredhisshoulders,saluted, and squeezed out a smile to her. “I’m Frank, and you ... you must be Hollis. May ... May I take you to dinner?” The woman smile
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