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,必然作文開頭十忌重點(diǎn)不明,主旨不清,文字不精,陷于盲目性,而且下文再談到它,必然還會(huì)重復(fù),所以引用應(yīng)有所取舍和選擇?!◤B門市《岸?流水?奔放》)流水清清,蕩漾起聲與色的韻律,飄逸出生命的華彩與燦爛流水柔柔,點(diǎn)染開情感的溫和,播灑下愛的春露。春天,綠色的使者,希望的象征;陽光,溫柔的天使,光明的象征。在這個(gè)世界上,一星隕落,黯淡不了星空燦爛;一花凋零,荒蕪不了整個(gè)春天。雖然你現(xiàn)在還只是一株稚嫩的幼苗。不記得曾有多少雨飄在胸前風(fēng)響在耳畔,只知道滄桑早已漫進(jìn)了我的心爬上了我的臉。1“成功的花,人們只驚羨它現(xiàn)時(shí)的明艷;而當(dāng)初的芽,卻浸透了奮斗的淚泉,灑滿了犧牲的血雨。寒天冷日,讓我們用什么來溫暖迎風(fēng)而立的自己?留些真誠給自己取暖吧!1大海如果失去巨浪的翻滾,也就失去了雄渾;沙漠如果失去了飛沙的狂舞,也就失去了壯美;人生如果失去了真實(shí)的歷程,也就失去了意義。友誼的港灣溫情脈脈,友誼的清風(fēng)灌滿征帆。那么,信念就是那穹頂?shù)牧褐褪悄巧钤臉涓?,就是那扇?dòng)的翅膀。(《愛心》)2成熟是一種明亮而不刺眼的光輝,一種圓潤(rùn)而不膩耳的音響,一種不需要對(duì)別人察顏觀色的從容,一種終于停止了向周圍申訴求告的大氣,一種不理會(huì)哄鬧的微笑,一種洗刷了偏激的淡漠,一種無須聲張的厚實(shí),一種并不陡峭的高度。(《青春》)2青春,是三月爭(zhēng)奇斗艷的花朵,是七月繽紛的太陽雨,是十月灼人的紅葉;是噴霧的旭日,是競(jìng)發(fā)的百舸,是搏擊長(zhǎng)空的雄鷹;是彈著歡樂的琴弦,是一路坎坷,一路執(zhí)著地奔向大海的小溪,是挺直了軀干,舒展了滿懷的蔥蘢,熱烈地?fù)肀{(lán)天的白楊。朋友,在與你相處的四個(gè)春去秋來的日子里,友情讓我加倍珍惜。而且句式整齊,富有文采,很有感染力和吸引力。”由此進(jìn)入文章的主體部分,可謂言此意彼,欲擒故縱,曲徑通幽,韻味悠長(zhǎng)。亮點(diǎn)賞析:文中,作者從自然現(xiàn)象入手,托物起興,鋪敘了自然界中許多事物之間都充滿了濃濃的“關(guān)愛”,并且運(yùn)用擬人手法,使這些事物具有人情味。ADJ2=misleading,doubtrul, etc[3] In fact(As a matter of fact),…(follow[2])[4] However, it is not(quite, necessarily)the case.[5] This(It)is not(quite, necessarily)the case and needs to bo fruther considered/discussed.(or:furtherconsideration/discussion)引述他人觀點(diǎn)(為提出自己觀點(diǎn)鋪墊)[1] It is widely(monly)accepted(hold)+THAT[2] A widely accepted(monly)hold idea(point of view,viewpoint, opinion,assumption)is +THAT/NP[3] A/The dominant(prevalent, prevailing)idea(see [2])is NP/to DO[4] It is taken for granted+THAT(or:We often/frequently take it for granted THAT)[5] People(The majority)seem to get accustomed to the idea(see [2]),without questioning,THAT[6] People are willing to regard NP1 as NP2/ADJ[7] People are willing to DO,while reluctant to DO第四篇:作文的開頭結(jié)尾方法指導(dǎo)作文的開頭是非常重要的,它對(duì)理清思路、引出下文、凸現(xiàn)文章的中心,都有著重要的作用。這種開頭一下子就能吸引讀者的注意力,而且還不會(huì)跑題。2.提示中心法。這一中心。4.設(shè)置懸念法。我和表姐緊走幾步,也圍了過去??5.對(duì)比法。由人、事、景、物、等引起回憶,聯(lián)想、引出下文,展開情節(jié),這種方法就叫回憶聯(lián)想法。這種開頭起筆自然,往往給人以新鮮的感覺。因此,一篇文章怎樣開頭,采用哪種方法,一定要從文章中心表達(dá)的需要出發(fā),適應(yīng)不同體裁的特點(diǎn)做到新穎明快,言簡(jiǎn)意賅。因此,我們寫作文時(shí),不僅要很好地考慮開頭,還要認(rèn)真地琢磨結(jié)尾。篇末點(diǎn)題法。再如《故鄉(xiāng)的榕樹》的結(jié)尾:“我愛故鄉(xiāng)的山山水水,更愛故鄉(xiāng)的大榕樹。有些文章,還常緊扣中心來結(jié)尾。像《恩來練字》這篇文章,寫的是“恩來練字”的事,結(jié)尾寫道:“恩來又拿起毛筆,把那兩個(gè)字認(rèn)真地重寫一遍。首尾呼應(yīng)法。第五篇:作文開頭方法怎樣開頭開門見山,直入正題如《桂林山水》的開頭:人們都說:“桂林山水甲天下。夏天別的地方熱得搖蒲扇,大雪山還是白雪紛紛,寒風(fēng)刺骨。因此,很難有一個(gè)統(tǒng)一的要求,但是,對(duì)于小學(xué)生來說,學(xué)一點(diǎn)作文開頭的知識(shí)是必要的。揭示矛盾,引出故事如《兩個(gè)中隊(duì)委員》的開頭:李玲和肖敏同在一個(gè)班,又都是中隊(duì)委員,可是兩人見面不打招,呼,說話要抬杠,倒像是個(gè)冤家。提出問題,引導(dǎo)思路如《海底世界》的開頭:你可知道,大海的深處是怎樣的?描寫環(huán)境,渲染氣氛如《大雪山》的開頭:大雪山在四川省的西部,那里沒有人煙,沒有花草樹木,連條山路山路都沒有。如《九寨溝》中“雪峰插云,古木參天,平湖飛瀑”是對(duì)第三段的總結(jié),“異獸珍禽”是對(duì)第四段的總結(jié),“九寨溝真是個(gè)充滿詩情畫意的人間仙境”是對(duì)全文的總結(jié),又和“一進(jìn)入景區(qū),就像到了一個(gè)童話世界”呼應(yīng)。我們知道,一篇文章如果沒有真情實(shí)感是不能打動(dòng)讀者的,這情感是在字里行間流露出來的,尤其到了結(jié)尾,作者的感情已達(dá)到高潮,往往要直接抒發(fā)出來,我們稱它為“直抒胸臆”。水到渠成法?!缎℃?zhèn)的早晨》結(jié)尾“小鎮(zhèn)的早晨多美呀!”是對(duì)“小鎮(zhèn)的早晨是恬靜的”、“小鎮(zhèn)的早晨是熱鬧的”、“小鎮(zhèn)的早晨是緊張的”三段的一個(gè)總結(jié)。例如《井》的結(jié)尾是這樣寫的:“這就是我們村的井。不同的文章有不同的結(jié)尾;同一題目、同一題材的文章,也可以有多種多樣的結(jié)尾。一篇文章除了要有一個(gè)好的開頭,還要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾。而作文開頭的方法,還有很多,像引用法,敘事法,故事引入法,提出問題法等等,不同體裁,不同內(nèi)容的文章要行選用不同的開頭方法,即使是同一篇文章,也可以有不同的開頭方法。7.對(duì)話開頭法。運(yùn)用對(duì)比法可以使描繪的形象更為突出,增強(qiáng)文章的表達(dá)效果,給人留下深刻的印象。這種方法可以激發(fā)讀者強(qiáng)烈的興趣,如《智斗奸商》一文的開頭寫到的:放暑假的第二天旱上,我和表姐一塊兒去買菜。描寫人物和景物來開頭,這種方法就是描寫引入法?!吧钤诩w中間是幸福的,兩年前,我深深地體會(huì)到這一點(diǎn)。這個(gè)開頭就點(diǎn)明了時(shí)間——“下課”,地點(diǎn)——“操場(chǎng)上”,人物——“同學(xué)們”,事情——“課間活動(dòng)”。開頭的方法很多,常見有:1.開門見山法。第三篇:高中英語作文寫作開頭指導(dǎo)方法高中英語輔導(dǎo)網(wǎng)重要與必要;(應(yīng))注意與重視[1] NP1 is of great importance(necessity, value)in NP2(or: NP is of enormous significance)[2] The importance(necessity)of NP(to do sth.)lies in(the fact)that…[3] NP1 plays, as is known, an irreplaceably important role in NP2[4] The irreplaceably important role NP1 plays in NP2 is significant(obvous)[5] NP1 is an indispensable part of NP2[6] It is important(necessary)to DO(or:THAT)[7] Special attention should be pay to …(or: We should pay special attention to…)[8] What we should take into consideration is +NP二擇其一[1] If it were left for me to decide whether(whclause),I would, without hesitation, choose+to DO(or: I would prefer the former/the latter)[2] To DO/NP is a matter of prerence.[3] It is difficult to make a choice for one can hardly gain most without losing any.[4] The difficulty lies in the fact that the advantages and disadvantages of both cases are equally obvious.[5] In fact, we may well preserve a delicate balance or promise between the two than go to extreme.[6] It is not sensible to exclude one of the choices pletely[7](of two conflicting ideas, concepts)Though conflicting to one another, they are so closely associated that understanding one will be impossible without discussing the other.[8] The benefits of NP are varied…[9]While disadvantages are unavoidable, it is the advantages that :說明原因和理由,層進(jìn),舉例,轉(zhuǎn)折[1] The reason lies in several aspects,[2] The reason why+clause+[1, underlined][3] There are several remarkab