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限,只能寫一些短句和簡(jiǎn)單句,那么如何讓學(xué)生結(jié)合已有的知識(shí)寫出高于現(xiàn)有水平的短文呢?筆者在課堂上大膽嘗試過(guò)程性寫作法,并結(jié)合互聯(lián)網(wǎng)大會(huì)這一重大社會(huì)事件,把它融入課堂寫作,取得良好的效果。為了此次會(huì)議的召開,桐鄉(xiāng)各界正如火如荼地做著準(zhǔn)備,本堂寫作課正是在這樣的背景下設(shè)計(jì)的,用M9學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)描寫桐鄉(xiāng)各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的人們?yōu)檫@次會(huì)議的到來(lái)正在做些什么。本堂課的寫作目標(biāo)就是第四級(jí)目標(biāo)。以新課標(biāo)的“三維目標(biāo)”為依據(jù),注重學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的過(guò)程,關(guān)注學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的興趣和經(jīng)驗(yàn),在學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)現(xiàn)和創(chuàng)造,這種教學(xué)理念正是“過(guò)程寫作法”的核心思想。 寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用已有知識(shí)和課堂所學(xué)知識(shí)進(jìn)行寫作,根據(jù)提綱,完成初稿。其中U2 They’re waiting for buses or ,這篇文本的中心句是:At this moment, in different places of the world, people are doing different things. 在不同的地方,人們正在做不同的事情。外研版新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)教材每個(gè)模塊都有一個(gè)話題結(jié)合一篇聽說(shuō)文章、一篇閱讀文章和一個(gè)寫作任務(wù),通過(guò)平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練,學(xué)生在寫作方面具有良好的基礎(chǔ)。達(dá)到課標(biāo)的第四級(jí)目標(biāo)要求。(胡春洞,1990) 教師首先要從學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言輸入入手,促進(jìn)學(xué)生在有足夠語(yǔ)言輸入量的情況下進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言輸出。四是采取聽說(shuō)式輸入,在教學(xué)中培養(yǎng)學(xué)生聽說(shuō)能力的同時(shí),促使學(xué)生更多地以寫作中常用的語(yǔ)言為切入口進(jìn)行交流。 1. 導(dǎo)入 用M9U2的中心句引出互聯(lián)網(wǎng)大會(huì),“From U2, we know that at this moment, in different places of the world, people are doing different things. These days people in Tongxiang are very busy. Do you know why?”學(xué)生馬上想到大事件――互聯(lián)網(wǎng)大會(huì)(the big event ― WIC)。對(duì)于七年級(jí)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō),要讀懂China Daily上的整篇文章是比較困難的,所以本課截取了一篇報(bào)道中烏鎮(zhèn)鎮(zhèn)長(zhǎng)Zhu Xuelong和一位高校教師志愿者Yao Chunyan接受采訪說(shuō)的話: “Wuzhen has been preparing for the 2015 conference since last year’s closed,” said town mayor Zhu Xuelong. “We hope, after a year, people will see a brand new Wuzhen”. Among 994 volunteers, 259 volunteers will provide a onetoone translation service to international guests. “I’ve been preparing intensively in the past month, memorizing key points of the conference and keeping a notepad by my side,” Yao Chunyan, a volunteer and high school English teacher, told the media. 要求學(xué)生給China Daily寫一封信,告訴他們桐鄉(xiāng)各界正在為此次大會(huì)做些什么準(zhǔn)備。2: The workers are