【正文】 第一篇：2012英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作輔導(dǎo)記敘文的思路與練習(xí)記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷和事物的發(fā)展變化過程為主要表現(xiàn)形式的一種文體。記敘文既可以以寫人為主，又可以以寫事為主。寫記敘文要注意記敘文的“六大要素”即：時(shí)間(When)—— 何時(shí)發(fā)生，有沒有具體時(shí)間?地點(diǎn)(Where)—— 何地發(fā)生，有沒有地點(diǎn)變化?人物(Who)—— 何人參與，誰(shuí)是主角?事件(What)—— 發(fā)生了什么，有何特點(diǎn)?原因(Why)—— 事件的起因?結(jié)果(How)—— 事件的經(jīng)過及結(jié)局?一般說來，在一篇記敘文中這六大要素是缺一不可的。記敘文的思路就圍繞這六大要素充分展開?！纠克募?jí)考試中，只出現(xiàn)過一次專門的記敘文體裁的寫作，即“An Early Morning Walk”(.)，2003年6月出現(xiàn)過包含記敘文的作文，即“An EyeWitness Account of a Traffic Accident”。對(duì)于“An Early Morning Walk”，知道命題要求后，我們就要開始構(gòu)思了。When：題目已規(guī)定了是“清晨”，在這個(gè)時(shí)候，“我”去散步。Where：到哪兒散步?去公園?在校園里?在街上(街上空氣不好，還是不去!)。Who：在公園里看到晨練的人：中老年人、年輕人、小孩子。在校園里看到讀書背單詞的學(xué)生。What：人們熱火朝天地做操，隨音樂跳舞，打球，等等。Why：清晨空氣清新，適合鍛煉。一日之際在于晨，背背書，讀讀單詞。當(dāng)然，由這個(gè)題目可以令人想到很多東西，因篇幅所限，我們做了刪減。參考范文An Early Morning WalkOne morning I got up very early，and everything around was very sun had just risen，shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden were only some birds singing occasionally in the tall strolled along the street toward the park，breathing the fresh air and feeling extremely I arrived at the park，I found，to my surprise，that there were so many people and women，boys and girls，all were enjoying themselves in their various were doing morning exercises，some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other wandered around the my delight，I found a few middleschool students talking to each other in English in one corner of the went up and spoke to them in soon became was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken the way home，I realized that an early morning walk really was good and early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章按照時(shí)間順序(in chronological order)，第一句話點(diǎn)明時(shí)間(One morning)、人物(第一人稱“I”)，并簡(jiǎn)要描述了早晨的特點(diǎn)(What was the setting)，接著第二段第一句話交代地點(diǎn)(in the park)，然后介紹公園里人們及作者的活動(dòng)(What was happening)，最后在文章結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題，即，歸納中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and “六大要素”，又有明確的中心思想和生動(dòng)的細(xì)節(jié)，行文方式符合要求?！癆 Most Unlucky Day”為題，想想該怎么寫。注意：題目的中心詞是“unlucky”。When：Where：Who：What：Why：How：參考思路When：哪一天是最倒霉的日子?考前的晚上?公布成績(jī)的日子?周末?Where：在大街上違章停車?在學(xué)校?在商場(chǎng)?在經(jīng)常光顧的地方——食堂、餐廳、麥當(dāng)勞、圖書館、溜冰場(chǎng)、投影廳?Who：是我倒霉?是好友?你?那個(gè)蛋白質(zhì)室友?What：拿到罰單?上課上班遲到?失戀?被竊?四級(jí)沒過?Why：倒霉嘛，無(wú)非是運(yùn)氣不好，睡過頭了、態(tài)度惡劣、偷懶、不刻苦?How：一團(tuán)糟，挨批，心情極度沮喪，不過也無(wú)所謂嘛?想完之后，我們?cè)倩c(diǎn)兒功夫?qū)㈥P(guān)聯(lián)的東東挑出來，別忘了本文的中心是“unlucky”。根據(jù)自己的思路，寫一篇文章：參考范文A Most Unlucky DayI had a streak of tough luck ，it seemed to me，went I simply couldn’t understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single the morning，as luck would have it，my alarm clock didn’t ring，and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than was in such a hurry that，when making an omelet，I got my fingers burnt and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the no time for my breakfast at that point，I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting had intended to catch the 7:30 subway，but somehow I couldn’t make became very nervous at the mere thought of being late for my English class，because my English teacher is very strict and demanding，and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his getting off the 7:40 subway，I raced all the way from the station to my school，thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi at this hour of the the corner of the street near my school，I abruptly bumped into a man and，worse luck，broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology，I just kept on running and long last，I arrived at the school only to find，with great sadness mixed with some relief，that the school was empty and the classrooms were all was ill luck showed no sign of ing to an I returned home greatly frustrated，I found myself locked my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with my luck!【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這篇文章按照時(shí)間順序一氣呵成。文章的標(biāo)題、第一句和最后一句都點(diǎn)出了中心思想：“I had a most unlucky day”。故事從作者醒來開始，在慌慌張張中煎蛋卷、趕地鐵、急奔學(xué)校、撞破眼鏡、發(fā)現(xiàn)白忙乎了一場(chǎng)，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了鑰匙!整個(gè)故事描述得精彩生動(dòng)，既有動(dòng)作的細(xì)節(jié)又有作者內(nèi)心的感受，讓讀者也身臨其境地體會(huì)了倒霉的一天。根據(jù)以下提示敘述一場(chǎng)交通事故：1)用第一人稱。2)短語(yǔ)提示：drive home at about 30 kilometers an hour。it was dark。a small girl chased a dog。not hit her but hit a car in the other direction3)寫出作者對(duì)此交通意外的感想。參考范文Last night I was driving home from had an was following behind a truck，driving at about 30 kilometers an was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting a small girl ran onto the road from the was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my I did not hit her，but I hit a car ing in the other I was not driving very fast so the damage was not is better to damage a car than to injure a young child，I thought to ： 以第一人稱寫一篇記敘文，講述在旅行中經(jīng)歷的一件小事。參考范文Go on a Mediterranean JourneyMy wife and I have always enjoyed traveling by sea，and last year we decided to go on a Mediterranean our holiday was rather expensive we thought that the high standard of acmodation，the firstclass food and the many interesting places we saw were well worth the price we found that most of the other passengers were friendly and interesting，but there was one man，a ，who irritated and annoyed subject we talked about，it seemed that he was an expert at had，apparently，read more books，visited more countries and studied more languages，than anyone else a few days，we ate our meals in silence，because nobody wanted to begin a conversation that would soon be taken over by this my wife had an suggested that we might think of an unusual subject，look it up in an encyclopedia and then talk about it at it were an unusual subject， could not possibly know anything about subject we chose was “English Agriculture in the Eleventh Century.” At dinner that night we discussed this subject with great “How I Overe Difficulties in Learning English”、“My Ideal Job”以及圖表作文的第一段都屬于說明文的范疇，如，2002年6月的根據(jù)坐標(biāo)圖寫題為“Students Use of Computers”的作文。說明文必須按一定的順序進(jìn)行說明：時(shí)間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序或認(rèn)識(shí)順序，選擇具體的特點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)來說明。所以，說明文的思路要圍繞說明順序、事物的特點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)展開。例如：范文點(diǎn)評(píng)A Famous ClockWhen you visit London，one of the first things you will