【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 resh air and feeling extremely I arrived at the park，I found，to my surprise，that there were so many people and women，boys and girls，all were enjoying themselves in their various were doing morning exercises，some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other wandered around the my delight，I found a few middleschool students talking to each other in English in one corner of the went up and spoke to them in soon became was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken the way home，I realized that an early morning walk really was good and early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.【點評】文章按照時間順序(in chronological order)，第一句話點明時間(One morning)、人物(第一人稱“I”)，并簡要描述了早晨的特點(What was the setting)，接著第二段第一句話交代地點(in the park)，然后介紹公園里人們及作者的活動(What was happening)，最后在文章結尾點題，即，歸納中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and “六大要素”，又有明確的中心思想和生動的細節(jié)，行文方式符合要求?！癆 Most Unlucky Day”為題，想想該怎么寫。注意：題目的中心詞是“unlucky”。When：Where：Who：What：Why：How：參考思路When：哪一天是最倒霉的日子?考前的晚上?公布成績的日子?周末?Where：在大街上違章停車?在學校?在商場?在經(jīng)常光顧的地方——食堂、餐廳、麥當勞、圖書館、溜冰場、投影廳?Who：是我倒霉?是好友?你?那個蛋白質(zhì)室友?What：拿到罰單?上課上班遲到?失戀?被竊?四級沒過?Why：倒霉嘛，無非是運氣不好，睡過頭了、態(tài)度惡劣、偷懶、不刻苦?How：一團糟，挨批，心情極度沮喪，不過也無所謂嘛?想完之后，我們再花點兒功夫?qū)㈥P聯(lián)的東東挑出來，別忘了本文的中心是“unlucky”。根據(jù)自己的思路，寫一篇文章：參考范文A Most Unlucky DayI had a streak of tough luck ，it seemed to me，went I simply couldn’t understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single the morning，as luck would have it，my alarm clock didn’t ring，and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than was in such a hurry that，when making an omelet，I got my fingers burnt and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the no time for my breakfast at that point，I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting had intended to catch the 7:30 subway，but somehow I couldn’t make became very nervous at the mere thought of being late for my English class，because my English teacher is very strict and demanding，and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his getting off the 7:40 subway，I raced all the way from the station to my school，thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi at this hour of the the corner of the street near my school，I abruptly bumped into a man and，worse luck，broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology，I just kept on running and long last，I arrived at the school only to find，with great sadness mixed with some relief，that the school was empty and the classrooms were all was ill luck showed no sign of ing to an I returned home greatly frustrated，I found myself locked my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with my luck!【點評】這篇文章按照時間順序一氣呵成。文章的標題、第一句和最后一句都點出了中心思想：“I had a most unlucky day”。故事從作者醒來開始，在慌慌張張中煎蛋卷、趕地鐵、急奔學校、撞破眼鏡、發(fā)現(xiàn)白忙乎了一場，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了鑰匙!整個故事描述得精彩生動，既有動作的細節(jié)又有作者內(nèi)心的感受，讓讀者也身臨其境地體會了倒霉的一天。根據(jù)以下提示敘述一場交通事故：1)用第一人稱。2)短語提示：drive home at about 30 kilometers an hour。it was dark。a small girl chased a dog。not hit her but hit a car in the other direction3)寫出作者對此交通意外的感想。參考范文Last night I was driving home from had an was following behind a truck，driving at about 30 kilometers an was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting a small girl ran onto the road from the was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my I did not hit her，but I hit a car ing in the other I was not driving very fast so the damage was not is better to damage a car than to injure a young child，I thought to ： 以第一人稱寫一篇記敘文，講述在旅行中經(jīng)歷的一件小事。參考范文Go on a Mediterranean JourneyMy wife and I have always enjoyed traveling by sea，and last year we decided to go on a Mediterranean our holiday was rather expensive we thought that the high standard of acmodation，the firstclass food and the many interesting places we saw were well worth the price we found that most of the other passengers were friendly and interesting，but there was one man，a ，who irritated and annoyed subject we talked about，it seemed that he was an expert at had，apparently，read more books，visited more countries and studied more languages，than anyone else a few days，we ate our meals in silence，because nobody wanted to begin a conversation that would soon be taken over by this my wife had an suggested that we might think of an unusual subject，look it up in an encyclopedia and then talk about it at it were an unusual subject， could not possibly know anything about subject we chose was “English Agriculture in the Eleventh Century.” At dinner that night we discussed this subject with great 歷年四級考試中的“How I Overe Difficulties in Learning English”、“My Ideal Job”以及圖表作文的第一段都屬于說明文的范疇，如，2002年6月的根據(jù)坐標圖寫題為“Students Use of Computers”的作文。說明文必須按一定的順序進行說明：時間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序或認識順序，選擇具體的特點和細節(jié)來說明。所以，說明文的思路要圍繞說明順序、事物的特點和細節(jié)展開。例如：范文點評A Famous ClockWhen you visit London，one of the first things you will see is Big Ben，the famous clock which can be heard all over the world on the the Houses of Parliament had not been burned down in 1834，the great clock would never have been Ben takes its name from Sir Benjamin Hall who was responsible for the making of the clock when the new Houses of Parliament were being is not only of immense size，but is extremely accurate as from Greenwich Observatory have the clock checked twice a the can hear the clock when it is actually striking because microphones are connected to the clock Ben has rarely gone ，however，it failed to give the correct painter who had been working on the tower hung a pot of paint on one of the hands and slowed it down!【點評】這是《新概念英語》中的一篇經(jīng)典說明文，介紹了世界著名的“大本鐘”。文章開篇指明該鐘位于英國倫敦，且全世界的人們通過BBC就能夠聽到鐘聲。接下來講述了“大本鐘”的由來，特點——不僅外型巨大，而且走時準確，在結尾處講了“大本鐘”的一個幽默的小插曲——油漆工把油漆桶掛在指針上，把鐘弄慢了。細讀這篇文章，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，區(qū)區(qū)159個單詞就把“大本鐘”的光輝形象牢牢地刻在讀者的腦海里，為什么?本文基于事實，分析了主題的來龍去脈，語言簡潔又不失生動貼切，作者態(tài)度客觀又充滿幽默，使讀者既“明白了事理”，又對事物有較完整明晰的了解認識，此乃說明文之真諦也